Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达天气状况。

예시: The weather in my city is usually pleasant because it has low pollution and a small population.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议直接表达偏好并给出具体原因。

예시: I prefer cold weather because many people travel during winter, and I enjoy the calm atmosphere it brings.

제안: 回答内容混乱，未直接回答问题。建议明确表达喜欢干燥或潮湿天气，并给出具体理由。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and enjoy outdoor activities without worrying about rain.

제안: 回答不够具体且表达不清晰。建议直接说明是否习惯查看天气预报，并说明频率和原因。

예시: I usually check the weather forecast every morning to plan my day, but I don't watch weather shows often.

제안: 表达不清楚，语法错误多。建议简洁明了地说明气候变化的影响，并举例说明。

예시: I believe climate change has caused global warming, leading to hotter summers and more extreme weather events.

제안: 回答表达不流畅，语法和词汇使用不当。建议直接表达愿望并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it is interesting to experience new environments and cultures.

× My city weather is very good because, uh, there are don't alot of population and ours pollution cards pollutions.

✓ The weather in my city is very good because there isn't a lot of population and our pollution is low.

这里“city weather”应改为“the weather in my city”，更符合英语表达习惯；“there are don't alot of population”中“don't”用法错误，应为“there isn't a lot of population”，表示“没有很多人口”；“ours pollution cards pollutions”表达混乱，应改为“our pollution is low”，表示“我们的污染很少”。这些都是单复数和表达习惯的问题。

× So I think my city where is a very good.

✓ So I think my city is very good.

句子结构混乱，“my city where is a very good”中“where”多余且位置错误，应去掉，调整为“my city is very good”。

× I feed the uh code because a lot of people to travel yeah or winter, for example, a lot of old people, older CT control culture people to travel in in in the.

✓ I feel the cold because a lot of people travel in winter. For example, many old people travel during this season.

“feed”应为“feel”，动词形式错误；“to travel”不符合句子结构，应直接用动词原形“travel”；句子中多余重复词汇需删除，句子应简洁明了。

× Yes, because, uh, there are are there are a lot of loudspeaker winters in, in my city, for example, my there are a lot of outbuilding in the season change indexing he centers so.

✓ Yes, because there are a lot of loud winters in my city. For example, there are many buildings affected during the season change.

“loudspeaker winters”应为“loud winters”，词汇错误；“outbuilding”应为“buildings”，单复数错误；句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× I don't like watching. Be 'cause I see, I think it is old people to to to work change. For example, my father like watching watching the shows. I think it is no fun.

✓ I don't like watching it because I think it's for old people to check the weather. For example, my father likes watching the shows. I think it's no fun.

“Be 'cause”应为“because”，拼写错误；“it is old people to to to work change”表达不清，应改为“it's for old people to check the weather”，使用了错误的动词和结构；“my father like”应为“my father likes”，主谓一致错误。

× I think it is warming globals, for example on my My Stevie Y Ray or warming in the world. Also the summer is a very hard I don't.

✓ I think global warming is happening. For example, in my city, the weather is getting warmer. Also, the summer is very hot.

“warming globals”应为“global warming”，词序错误；“My Stevie Y Ray or warming in the world”无意义，应改为“in my city, the weather is getting warmer”；“the summer is a very hard”表达错误，应为“the summer is very hot”。

× Yes, because I very like to trying all city. And the warming because I think is a very knew it important things. I don't like leaving the here however long time.

✓ Yes, because I really like trying all cities. And the warming is very important. I don't like living here for a long time.

“very like to trying”应为“really like trying”，副词和动词形式错误；“all city”应为“all cities”，单复数错误；“knew it important things”应为“very important”，拼写和表达错误；“leaving the here”应为“living here”，词汇错误；“however long time”应为“for a long time”，介词使用错误。