Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar to describe the weather. Avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'quiet' and 'Hammett condition'. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: The weather in Vietnam is mostly tropical and warm throughout the year. During the rainy season, it often rains heavily, which can sometimes cause inconvenience.

제안: Your answer should be more grammatically correct and clear. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases like 'ground weather post my MOT'. Also, try to provide a clear reason and examples for your preference.

예시: Personally, I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time outdoors doing activities like swimming or hiking with my friends. I also feel more energetic in warm weather.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid unclear phrases like 'refill brake weather' and 'IFA is much more in joinable'. Provide specific reasons and examples for your preference.

예시: I prefer dry weather because it gives me the chance to take part in many outdoor activities with my friends and family. For example, we often go hiking or have picnics when the weather is sunny and bright.

제안: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and clear. Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'for symbol is' and 'Is group like rain'.

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. This helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to take an umbrella in case it rains.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide specific effects of climate change with examples.

예시: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events like floods and droughts in recent years. These changes have affected people's lives and damaged the environment in many countries.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Explain why you want to visit places with different climates.

예시: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live because I enjoy experiencing new weather conditions. For example, I would like to spend a season in a cold country to see how people adapt to the climate.

× The weather in Vietnam is quiet, tropical, we ask in Hammett condition for most of the year.

✓ The weather in Vietnam is quite tropical; we have a humid climate for most of the year.

The word 'quiet' is incorrect here; it should be 'quite' to indicate degree. Also, 'we ask in Hammett condition' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'we have a humid climate' to describe the weather condition. Proper punctuation is needed to separate ideas.

× During the rainy season is often poor, heavy, we can be powerful reversing an inconvenient.

✓ During the rainy season, it is often heavy and can be powerful, causing inconvenience.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'During the rainy season is often poor, heavy' is incorrect; it should be 'it is often heavy'. 'We can be powerful reversing an inconvenient' is unclear and likely meant to say 'can be powerful, causing inconvenience'. Proper sentence structure and clarity are needed.

× Personally, I refer hot weather because it allowed me to spend more time outdoor activity and enjoy at everything like swimming or hiking with my friend.

✓ Personally, I prefer hot weather because it allows me to spend more time on outdoor activities and enjoy things like swimming or hiking with my friends.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. 'Allowed' should be present tense 'allows' to match the present preference. 'Outdoor activity' should be plural 'outdoor activities'. 'Enjoy at everything' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy things'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context.

× I find that ground weather post my MOT and give me more energy to Piatti.

✓ I find that warm weather boosts my mood and gives me more energy to play.

'Ground weather post my MOT' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it should be 'warm weather boosts my mood'. 'Piatti' is likely 'play'. Correct adjectives and verbs are needed for clarity.

× Personally, I refill brake weather because it's giving me the opportunity to pick take part in money outdoor activity with my friends and families for assemble.

✓ Personally, I prefer dry weather because it gives me the opportunity to take part in many outdoor activities with my friends and family, for example.

'Refill brake weather' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer dry weather'. 'Pick take part' is incorrect; it should be 'take part'. 'Money outdoor activity' should be 'many outdoor activities'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' in this context. 'For assemble' should be 'for example'.

× We often go hiking or have a picnic when the weather is sunny and bright. IFA is much more in joinable.

✓ We often go hiking or have a picnic when the weather is sunny and bright. It is much more enjoyable.

'IFA' is likely 'It is'. 'In joinable' should be 'enjoyable'. Correct spelling and word choice are necessary.

× Yes, I use need check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

✓ Yes, I need to check the weather forecast every morning before I leave the house.

'Use need check' is incorrect; it should be 'need to check'. Modal verb 'need' requires 'to' before the verb.

× This help me decide what the way and whether I need to take an umbrella for symbol is.

✓ This helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to take an umbrella with me.

'This help' should be 'This helps' to agree with singular subject. 'What the way' is incorrect; it should be 'what to wear'. 'For symbol is' is unclear; likely meant 'with me' or similar.

× Is group like rain and I made sure to repair accordingly.

✓ If it looks like rain, I make sure to prepare accordingly.

'Is group like rain' is unclear; likely 'If it looks like rain'. 'I made sure to repair' should be 'I make sure to prepare'. Correct pronouns and verbs are needed.

× I think climate rain have curve more extreme weather event in Greece and year that I have plus enhanced Grays they train have affected people blurry and environment in many countries for assemble some error have experience bro we impact AQ culture.

✓ I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events in recent years and has affected people and the environment in many countries. For example, some areas have experienced severe impacts on agriculture.

The original sentence is very unclear and contains many errors. 'Climate rain have curve' should be 'climate change has caused'. 'Greece and year that I have plus enhanced Grays they train' is unclear and likely 'recent years'. 'Blurry' should be 'people and environment'. 'For assemble' should be 'for example'. 'Bro we impact AQ culture' likely 'severe impacts on agriculture'. Present perfect tense is appropriate here.

× Yes, I would love to visit city there different climate trends from where I live because I enjoy his parents near weather condition for symbol I would like to spend a season in a country with away mist or a character limit to see how people adapt to is.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climate types from where I live because I enjoy experiencing new weather conditions. For example, I would like to spend a season in a country with a cold climate to see how people adapt to it.

'City there different climate trends' should be 'cities with different climate types'. 'His parents near weather condition' is unclear; likely 'experiencing new weather conditions'. 'For symbol' should be 'for example'. 'Away mist or a character limit' is unclear; likely 'a cold climate'. 'Adapt to is' should be 'adapt to it'. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing are needed.