Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding abrupt transitions like 'and however'. Use linking words properly to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: The weather in Malaysia is usually hot and humid throughout the year. At the moment, it is quite sunny, which is perfect for outdoor activities. However, it often rains suddenly in the evening due to the tropical climate.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Make sure to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Use simple and correct sentences to express your preference.

예시: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing. Hot weather can be tiring, especially when I am outside for a long time.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and try to link your ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing. Also, I can enjoy many outdoor activities when the weather is dry.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Answer the question directly and provide specific details about when and how often you check the forecast.

예시: I often check the weather forecast before I travel or plan outdoor activities. This helps me avoid bad weather like rain and plan my day better.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full response with specific examples or effects of climate change. Use complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

예시: I think climate change has caused significant effects in recent years, such as more extreme weather events, rising temperatures, and changes in rainfall patterns.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your interest.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather and environments.

× Right now is quite sunny, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities and however, it also rained suddenly in the evening because of the tropical climate.

✓ Right now it is quite sunny, which makes it perfect for outdoor activities; however, it also rained suddenly in the evening because of the tropical climate.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'and however' together, which is redundant and grammatically incorrect. 'However' is a conjunctive adverb and should be used with a semicolon or period before it, not with 'and'. Also, the subject 'it' is missing before 'is quite sunny'. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would prefer. Cold weather app compared to hot weather because cold weather ever been trying leaving the country desk over there so.

✓ I would prefer cold weather compared to hot weather because cold weather has always been more comfortable for me when living abroad.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'app' and 'country desk over there so'. The correction restructures the sentence to a clear, complete thought, removing unclear words and ensuring proper sentence flow.

× I would prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I find it drivers more comfortable and refreshing for me and I can do a lot of outdoor activities.

✓ I would prefer dry weather rather than wet weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing, and I can do a lot of outdoor activities.

The word 'drivers' is incorrectly used and seems to be a typo or misused word. Removing it and adjusting the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often check the weather forecast because before I travel because it help me plan my day battle.

✓ I often check the weather forecast before I travel because it helps me plan my day better.

The sentence has redundant 'because' and incorrect verb agreement 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, 'day battle' is likely a typo for 'day better'. Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.

× Usually I look at it. Toy City, especially if I have outdoor activity pants.

✓ Usually I look at it on my phone, especially if I have outdoor activities planned.

The phrase 'Toy City' and 'activity pants' are incorrect and likely misheard or mistyped. Replacing them with 'on my phone' and 'activities planned' corrects the preposition use and meaning.

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✓ I think it has caused significant changes in recent years, such as...

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete sentence with proper structure and meaning.

× Yes, of course I would like to visit other city that had different kind met from where I live, because I can I was very interesting in interest in. I did.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to visit other cities that have different kinds of climate from where I live, because I am very interested in them.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches ('city' should be 'cities', 'kind met' should be 'kinds of climate') and unclear phrases. Correcting these improves grammatical agreement and clarity.