Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免冗余。可以先直接回答问题，再补充具体细节。

예시: I live in Dongguan, where the weather is very hot and humid in summer. In winter, it is usually windy but not very dry compared to other cities.

제안: 回答表达不流畅且有多处语法错误，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体例子支持。注意单词拼写和语法的准确性。

예시: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel uncomfortable. For example, I often catch a cold when the weather is too cold.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法和用词错误，建议注意动词形式和词汇拼写，句子结构应更简洁自然。

예시: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable. For example, my clothes dry quickly and I can go outside without getting wet.

제안: 回答表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议简化句子，直接回答问题并说明频率和方式，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning on my phone to know the weather for the day.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用简单句子表达观点，提供具体且连贯的例子，注意词汇拼写和句子结构。

예시: In recent years, climate change has affected our lives. For example, rising sea levels threaten coastal areas, and higher temperatures cause more extreme weather.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子，直接表达愿望并举例说明，注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, like Harbin in China. I have never seen snow and want to experience cold weather.

× The city I lived which is called Dongguan in my hometown and the weather is Canon hot an wet in summer and we love Italy called and windy in winter but it's not that dry comparing to other cities.

✓ The city I live in, which is called Dongguan, is my hometown. The weather is canon hot and wet in summer, and we love Italy called and windy in winter, but it's not that dry compared to other cities.

这里“city”是单数，动词应使用单数形式“is”。另外，“weather”是不可数名词，描述时不需要复数形式。

× The city I lived which is called Dongguan in my hometown and the weather is Canon hot an wet in summer and we love Italy called and windy in winter but it's not that dry comparing to other cities.

✓ The city I live in, which is called Dongguan, is my hometown. The weather is canon hot and wet in summer, and we love Italy called and windy in winter, but it's not that dry compared to other cities.

“live”后面应加介词“in”表示居住的地点。

× The city I lived which is called Dongguan in my hometown and the weather is Canon hot an wet in summer and we love Italy called and windy in winter but it's not that dry comparing to other cities.

✓ The city I live in, which is called Dongguan, is my hometown. The weather is canon hot and wet in summer, and we love Italy called and windy in winter, but it's not that dry compared to other cities.

“Canon”应为“cannon”或“very”，且“an”应为“and”，“wet”拼写错误。

× The city I lived which is called Dongguan in my hometown and the weather is Canon hot an wet in summer and we love Italy called and windy in winter but it's not that dry comparing to other cities.

✓ The city I live in, which is called Dongguan, is my hometown. The weather is canon hot and wet in summer, and we love Italy called and windy in winter, but it's not that dry compared to other cities.

“lived”应为现在时“live”，因为描述的是现在的居住地。

× but it's not that dry comparing to other cities.

✓ but it's not that dry compared to other cities.

“comparing to”应改为“compared to”，表示比较。

× It's hard to choose between hard in cold weather in the extreme weather situation, but if I have to choose this size.

✓ It's hard to choose between hot and cold weather in extreme weather situations, but if I have to choose this time.

“between hard in cold weather”表达不清，应为“between hot and cold weather”；“this size”应为“this time”。

× It's hard to choose between hard in cold weather in the extreme weather situation, but if I have to choose this size.

✓ It's hard to choose between hot and cold weather in extreme weather situations, but if I have to choose this time.

“hard”用错，应为“hot”；“extreme weather situation”应为复数“situations”。

× It often affect my health.

✓ It often affects my health.

动词“affect”后不需要介词。

× It often affect my health.

✓ It often affects my health.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s。

× For example, I usually catch a call to when the other is called.

✓ For example, I usually catch a cold when the weather is cold.

“catch a call to”应为“catch a cold”，“the other is called”应为“the weather is cold”。

× clothes often takes several days to drive when the when it is rainy,

✓ clothes often take several days to dry when it is rainy,

“clothes”是复数，动词应使用复数形式“take”。

× clothes often takes several days to drive when the when it is rainy,

✓ clothes often take several days to dry when it is rainy,

“drive”应为“dry”，表示“干燥”。

× and therefore I prefer the dry wide weathered since it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

✓ and therefore I prefer the dry weather since it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

“wide weathered”表达错误，应为“dry weather”。

× Yes, I have this habit on like a as a. Daily room tint I will check it on in the morning everyday like I will click on my phone weather forecast on my page and then to know how is the weather today.

✓ Yes, I have this habit. Every morning, I check the weather forecast on my phone to know what the weather is like today.

原句中介词和表达混乱，应简化为正确的表达方式。

× In recent year account, climate change has significantly affect effects on our life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has significantly affected our lives.

“affect”应为过去分词“affected”，与现在完成时态搭配。

× In recent year account, climate change has significantly affect effects on our life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has significantly affected our lives.

“year”应为复数“years”，“life”应为复数“lives”。

× For example, the sea level, says reason which strategies coastal areas.

✓ For example, the rising sea level threatens coastal areas.

原句介词和词语使用错误，应改为正确表达。

× Additionally, global temperatures are increasing, leading to more extreme weather conditions around the world.

✓ Additionally, global temperatures are increasing, leading to more extreme weather conditions around the world.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I definitely want to have the change chance to to go another city that have different weathers such as the harping in China and never seen.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to have the chance to go to another city that has different weather, such as Harbin in China, which I have never seen.

“change chance”应为“chance”，“another city”后动词应为单数“has”，“weathers”应为不可数名词“weather”。

× Yes, I definitely want to have the change chance to to go another city that have different weathers such as the harping in China and never seen.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to have the chance to go to another city that has different weather, such as Harbin in China, which I have never seen.

“go another city”应为“go to another city”。

× I have never seen the snowy days in my life.

✓ I have never seen snowy days in my life.

“the snowy days”不需要定冠词“the”。

× I really want to go to extreme cold in the place that we have.

✓ I really want to go to an extremely cold place.

“extreme cold”应为副词修饰形容词“extremely cold”，且表达应简洁。