Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式描述天气，并避免重复。

예시: Today, it's stormy and rainy, but tomorrow the sun is expected to shine brightly.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意语法准确性，并丰富细节使回答更自然。

예시: I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes like tank tops or T-shirts, which makes getting dressed easier and more comfortable.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清，建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: I prefer wet weather because Beijing is very dry, especially in winter, so I often need to use hand cream to keep my skin moisturized.

제안: 回答较完整，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before going out because I need to know the temperature to decide whether to wear a coat, jacket, or just a skirt.

제안: 回答表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用简单句子清晰表达观点。

예시: I think climate change has made the weather more unpredictable. For example, although it's May, which is usually warm in Beijing, this year it is still quite cold.

제안: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，建议用完整句子表达，并具体说明不同气候的感受。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I used to live in Singapore, which has a hot and humid climate, very different from the dry and cold weather in Beijing.

× Today's weather is a storm raining day.

✓ Today's weather is a stormy rainy day.

这里'storm raining day'的表达不正确，应该用形容词stormy和rainy来修饰day，表示“暴风雨的下雨天”。storm是名词，不能直接用作形容词。

× And tomorrow is a sunny day.

✓ Tomorrow is a sunny day.

句首不宜用连词'And'，尤其在口语回答中，直接陈述更自然。

× Becaused during the hot weather I can wear the.

✓ Because during the hot weather I can wear.

'Becaused'是错误形式，应为'Because'。此外，句子不完整，后面缺少内容。

× I prefer the hot weather.

✓ I prefer hot weather.

在泛指天气时，通常不加定冠词'the'，直接说'hot weather'更自然。

× Becaused during the hot weather I can wear the. Tank or the T-shirt and I don't need to think too much about what I need to wear to go outside.

✓ Because during hot weather I can wear a tank top or a T-shirt and I don't need to think too much about what to wear when I go outside.

句子结构不完整且用词不当。'the'不应出现在这里，'tank'应为'tank top'，'what I need to wear to go outside'表达冗长，改为'what to wear when I go outside'更简洁。

× I pray for the white weather more.

✓ I prefer the white weather more.

'pray for'意思是祈祷，不符合语境，应为'prefer'表示偏好。

× 'Cause in the city I live now which is Beijing is a very dry city IK specially in the winter that I must to take a lot of hand cream to make my skin soft.

✓ 'Cause the city I live in now, which is Beijing, is a very dry city, especially in winter, so I must use a lot of hand cream to keep my skin soft.

缺少介词'in'，'IK'应为'specially'，'must to take'错误，应为'must use'，句子结构混乱，需调整。

× I must to take a lot of hand cream to make my skin soft.

✓ I must use a lot of hand cream to keep my skin soft.

情态动词'must'后面直接接动词原形，不能加'to'。

× I will check the weather forecast every day. Every morning before I go outside because I have to check the temperature and to decide what I need to wear.

✓ I check the weather forecast every day, every morning before I go outside because I have to check the temperature and decide what I need to wear.

'will check'表示将来时，不符合习惯动作，应使用一般现在时。'to decide'前不需要'and to'，直接用'and decide'。

× Like do I need to wear a coat or jacket or can I wear a skirt?

✓ For example, do I need to wear a coat or a jacket, or can I wear a skirt?

句首用'Like'不正式，改为'For example'更合适。缺少冠词'a'。

× I think it makes the weather be more weird like now is the is May usually DME in Beijing is already summer is already in the summer temperature, but you see this year is still cold now.

✓ I think it makes the weather weirder. For example, now is May, usually in Beijing it is already summer with summer temperatures, but this year it is still cold.

'more weird'应为'weirder'，句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整语序。

× Actually I live in Singapore before which is a very white weather. Place.

✓ Actually, I lived in Singapore before, which has very white weather.

时态错误，'live'应为过去式'lived'。'white weather'应为'wet weather'。句子断裂，需合并。

× Actually I live in Singapore before which is a very white weather. Place.

✓ Actually, I lived in Singapore before, which has very wet weather.

'live'应使用过去式'lived'，'white weather'应为'wet weather'，表示多雨的天气。