Weather— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，建议简洁明了地描述天气特点，避免重复和无关内容。

예시: I live in Wuhan, a city in central China. The weather here is very hot in summer, which is quite uncomfortable. It varies depending on the season and location.

제안: 表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接表达偏好并给出具体原因，使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer cold weather because I can sleep better during winter. The shorter daylight helps me get enough rest compared to hot summers.

제안: 表达不准确，词汇使用错误。建议清楚表达喜欢湿润天气的原因，并使用正确词汇。

예시: I prefer wet weather because I like humidity. Dry weather makes my skin dry and uncomfortable.

제안: 回答较长且断断续续，建议简洁连贯地说明习惯和频率，使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day, especially before going out for work. This helps me decide what clothes to wear.

제안: 表达不完整且语法错误较多。建议明确说明气候变化的影响，并用完整句子表达观点。

예시: I believe climate change has affected our daily lives. For example, in Wuhan, the weather has become hotter compared to decades ago, which impacts our environment and lifestyle.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误。建议简洁说明愿望并描述不同气候特点，使用连贯句子。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, the Philippines has two main seasons: the rainy season and the dry season, which is quite different from China's climate.

× So what I have why is famous for his hit One summer is very boring.

✓ So what I have is famous for its hot summer, which is very boring.

这里's hit One summer'应为'hot summer'，且'summer'是单数，'his'应改为'its'，因为指代城市的夏天。

× Because it depends. It depends is situation and location.

✓ Because it depends on the situation and location.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词'on'，应为'depends on'，使句子完整通顺。

× If I can choose I prefer to code because I prefer code then the hot weather because if I.

✓ If I can choose, I prefer cold weather because I prefer cold to hot weather.

'prefer to code'应为'prefer cold'，且比较时应使用'prefer A to B'结构，表达更准确。

× During the winter I'm I can sleep.

✓ During the winter, I can sleep well.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语，且'I’m I'重复，应简化为'I can sleep well'。

× The daylight is shorter than this summer, so I can sleep where and I have a sufficient sleep sleeping time.

✓ The daylight is shorter than in summer, so I can sleep more and have sufficient sleeping time.

'this summer'应改为'in summer'，'sleep where'应为'sleep more'，'a sufficient sleep sleeping time'重复，应简化。

× I prefer the wet weather because I can fear humid humid and I don't like the dry weather due to my skin will be broken.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I can bear humidity, and I don't like dry weather because it makes my skin dry and cracked.

'the wet weather'和'the dry weather'前的定冠词不必要，'fear humid humid'错误，应为'can bear humidity'，表达更准确。

× I have the habit and I usually check the. Weather for forecast almost everyday on especially doing before I.

✓ I have the habit and usually check the weather forecast almost every day, especially before I go out.

'everyday'应为'adverb'形式'every day'，'weather for forecast'应为'weather forecast'，句子结构需调整。

× Go out for. The business and I will check the weather and decide decide what kind of clothes should I dress.

✓ I go out for business, and I will check the weather to decide what kind of clothes I should wear.

句子断裂，'decide decide'重复，'should I dress'语序错误，应为'I should wear'。

× I do think the climate change we are influenced our daily life on.

✓ I do think climate change influences our daily life.

'climate change'是单数，谓语应用单数形式'influences'，且'we are influenced our daily life on'结构错误。

× I can observe the. Weather is become hotter, becomes hotter than the then decades ago.

✓ I can observe that the weather has become hotter than decades ago.

'is become'错误，应为'has become'，'then decades ago'应为'decades ago'，句子更通顺。

× So everything is changed now nowadays and I think protect my.

✓ So everything has changed nowadays, and I think we should protect the environment.

'is changed'应为'has changed'，'now nowadays'重复，'I think protect my'不完整，应补充完整。

× Oh yeah, of course I heard about the Philippines have different climate with China especially whether whether the city of living Philippines have two seasons during their whole years depends RAN season and dry season.

✓ Oh yeah, of course I heard that the Philippines has a different climate from China, especially the cities where people live. The Philippines has two seasons during the whole year: the rainy season and the dry season.

'the Philippines have'应为'singular has'，'different climate with'应为'different climate from'，'whether whether'重复，句子结构混乱，需调整。