Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤，建議使用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達。例如，避免重複使用"nowadays"，並注意主詞和動詞的一致性。

예시: Not really. Nowadays, most people prefer typing or speaking, so I don't write very often either.

제안: 回答中語法和用詞不夠自然，建議使用更清楚的句子結構，並避免使用不恰當的詞彙，如"inciting"。可以說明寫日記的原因並用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: I like to write a diary because it helps me record what I did each day and express my feelings, which is very meaningful to me.

제안: 回答語法錯誤較多且表達不清楚，建議使用簡單明確的句子，並用連接詞連接想法。可以說明隨著年齡增長，寫作內容會改變的原因。

예시: Yes, I think what I write changes as I grow older because my perspective on the world changes over time.

제안: 回答內容清楚，但句子較長且有些語法錯誤，建議分句並使用更自然的表達方式。

예시: I prefer typing, especially because I'm not a native English speaker. Typing allows me to use tools that check my grammar, which helps me improve my writing.

제안: 回答有點模糊且語法不夠正確，建議直接回答頻率並說明原因，使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: I usually keep a diary about once a month, mostly when something special or enjoyable happens.

제안: 回答不夠聚焦且語法錯誤，建議明確說明其他記錄生活的方法，並用更自然的英文表達。

예시: Besides writing, I use ChatGPT to record my thoughts and questions because it keeps a history that I can review later.

× Not really in nowadays people just typing or speaking.

✓ Not really, nowadays people just type or speak.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'typing' and 'speaking' as if they are the main verbs without auxiliary verbs. The correct present simple tense verbs are 'type' and 'speak' to describe habitual actions. Also, 'in nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' alone is sufficient.

× We don't write really often nowadays and including me.

✓ We don't write very often nowadays, including me.

The phrase 'really often' is better expressed as 'very often' for frequency. Also, 'and including me' is awkward; 'including me' alone suffices to include the speaker.

× I would like to write diary because you can like write down what you have done today and also share the emotion for the future you and that's quite engaging me and inciting to me.

✓ I would like to write a diary because you can write down what you have done today and also share your emotions with your future self, and that's quite engaging and exciting to me.

The phrase 'write diary' needs an article 'a diary'. 'Like' is unnecessary before 'write down'. 'Share the emotion for the future you' is unclear; it should be 'share your emotions with your future self'. 'Engaging me and inciting to me' is incorrect; 'engaging and exciting to me' is appropriate.

× Yeah, I think the thing you write would change during the age because when you grow up you see the world in different ways, especially when you are the kid you were think that words are promising, but after you get old.

✓ Yeah, I think the things you write change as you age because when you grow up you see the world in different ways. Especially when you are a kid, you think that words are promising, but after you get older, that changes.

'Would change' is better as 'change' to express a general truth. 'During the age' is incorrect; 'as you age' is correct. 'You were think' is incorrect; it should be 'you think'. 'The kid' should be 'a kid'. 'Get old' is better as 'get older'.

× I prefer typing, especially I'm not a native speaker when I'm typing English because there's a lot of resources that can detect the grammar mistake in your sentence and that really helps me to improve my writings.

✓ I prefer typing, especially because I'm not a native speaker when I type English, as there are a lot of resources that can detect grammar mistakes in your sentences, and that really helps me improve my writing.

'Especially I'm not a native speaker' needs 'because' to connect the reason. 'When I'm typing English' is better as 'when I type English'. 'There's a lot of resources' should be 'there are a lot of resources' because 'resources' is plural. 'Grammar mistake' should be plural 'grammar mistakes'. 'My writings' is better as 'my writing'.

× I would say once a month. I guess I'm not really sure because usually I do. I tend to do that because it's a special event or occasions that I really enjoyed in.

✓ I would say once a month. I guess I'm not really sure because usually I do it. I tend to do that when there is a special event or occasion that I really enjoy.

'Usually I do' is incomplete; it should be 'usually I do it'. 'Special event or occasions' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'special event or occasion'. 'I really enjoyed in' is incorrect; 'I really enjoy' is correct.

× I, I would say ChatGPT because usually when I have questions, I will ask him and he will give me the response.

✓ I would say ChatGPT because usually when I have questions, I ask it and it gives me the response.

ChatGPT is an AI and should be referred to as 'it', not 'him'. Also, 'I will ask' and 'he will give' can be simplified to present simple tense for habitual actions: 'I ask' and 'it gives'.