Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"lied"は誤用で、"write"が正しいです。また、内容が不明瞭で、具体的な説明が不足しています。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、文法の基本を見直しましょう。

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I am studying English by hand. Writing helps me remember new words and sentences better.

제안: 回答が意味不明で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答えておらず、理由も明確に述べられていません。質問に対して具体的かつ論理的に答える練習をしましょう。

예시: I like to write by hand because it feels easier and faster for me than typing.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べることが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習もしましょう。

예시: No, I don't think what I write will change because writing by hand helps me organize my ideas better and feel more connected to my thoughts. However, I am still learning to improve my writing.

제안: 内容は理解できますが、文法や表現に改善の余地があります。文を完結にし、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: It depends on the situation. I prefer typing when I need to submit documents to my teachers because I can send them anytime and anywhere.

제안: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。簡潔で自然な英語を使い、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: I keep a diary in English every day because I want to practice speaking and writing, and I think it helps improve my English skills.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な方法を明確に述べ、正しい表現を使う練習をしましょう。

예시: I often take pictures with my phone and keep a diary. Also, I record videos with my friends when we hang out.

× Yes, I lied a lot because I have been studying English on my hand.

✓ Yes, I wrote a lot because I have been studying English by hand.

The verb 'lied' is the past tense of 'lie' meaning to tell an untruth, which is incorrect here. The correct past tense verb is 'wrote' from 'write'. Also, the preposition 'on my hand' is incorrect; it should be 'by hand' to indicate handwriting.

× I have been studying English on my hand.

✓ I have been studying English by hand.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate the method of writing is 'by', so 'by hand' is the proper phrase.

× It is very vulnerable to remember some words or sentence.

✓ It is very difficult to remember some words or sentences.

The adjective 'vulnerable' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is 'difficult'. Also, 'sentence' should be plural 'sentences' to match 'some words'.

× And this is because I feel like more easily than typing and I I can faster than lighting.

✓ This is because I feel it is easier than typing and I can write faster than typing.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction use and missing words. 'And' at the start is unnecessary. 'Feel like more easily' is incorrect; it should be 'feel it is easier'. 'I I can faster than lighting' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I can write faster than typing'.

× No I don't I I can't organize my idea better and feel more connected to my thought by hand.

✓ No, I don't. I can't organize my ideas better and feel more connected to my thoughts by hand.

The sentence lacks punctuation and has repeated pronouns. 'Idea' and 'thought' should be plural to match the context. Proper punctuation improves clarity.

× So I still learning writing however.

✓ So I am still learning to write, however.

The verb 'learning' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'writing' should be 'to write' to express the action properly.

× Typing is very useful when I submit the document for. Teachers because it's It can submit anywhere and anytime.

✓ Typing is very useful when I submit documents to teachers because I can submit them anywhere and anytime.

The sentence has incorrect structure and punctuation. 'For. Teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'to teachers'. 'It's It can submit' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I can submit'. Also, 'the document' should be plural 'documents' to generalize.

× I keep Diaries in English every day because I want to practice English speaking and writing and it's I think it helps me enhance my English skills.

✓ I keep diaries in English every day because I want to practice English speaking and writing, and I think it helps me enhance my English skills.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. The sentence has punctuation issues; a comma is needed before 'and I think'. 'It's I think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'.

× I often take a picture on my phone and I keep Diaries.

✓ I often take pictures with my phone and I keep diaries.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'with my phone' is correct to indicate the device used. Also, 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'often'.

× Also I I take up movie with my friend when I hang out with them.

✓ Also, I take movies with my friends when I hang out with them.

The phrase 'take up movie' is incorrect; it should be 'take movies' or 'make movies'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. Repetition of 'I' is an error.