Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“a lot”，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I write frequently, mainly about my daily life and academic topics since I am a postgraduate student working on my dissertation.

제안: 回答中有口头语“uh”，影响流畅度。建议去除口头语，使用更自然连贯的表达，并丰富细节。

예시: I enjoy writing academic papers because it helps me conduct research and enhances my writing skills, which are essential for my studies.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“daily daily”，表达不够准确。建议注意用词准确，句子更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, my writing will change; currently, I focus on academic papers, but in the future, I might write personal journals to share my experiences.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“my my”和错误拼写“dessert desertations”，句子不完整。建议注意拼写和句子完整性，表达更清晰。

예시: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and efficient for completing my papers and dissertations.

제안: 回答中语法不准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态一致。

예시: I don't usually keep diaries now because I'm busy, but I used to write them regularly when I was a child.

제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

예시: I often use apps like WeChat on my smartphone to record my daily life because it's convenient and allows me to share my experiences with others easily.

× Yes, I often write a lot about my daily life or my academic paper because I am a post graduate student and writing dissertation is my duty and a task.

✓ Yes, I often write a lot about my daily life or my academic papers because I am a postgraduate student and writing dissertations is my duty and a task.

这里“academic paper”和“dissertation”应使用复数形式，因为通常学生会写多篇学术论文和多篇论文。单复数不一致导致表达不准确。

× I'd like to write some academic topics because, uh, writing academic papers is, uh, a part of my studies and writing this can help me do some research and improve my writing skills.

✓ I'd like to write on some academic topics because, uh, writing academic papers is, uh, a part of my studies and writing these can help me do some research and improve my writing skills.

“write some academic topics”应改为“write on some academic topics”，因为写作是针对主题进行的；“writing this”应改为“writing these”，指代前面的复数“academic papers”，保持数的一致。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change because now I'm writing on academic paper, but in the future I could write some daily daily lives on the journal and share my experience.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write would change because now I'm writing academic papers, but in the future I could write about daily life in a journal and share my experience.

“writing on academic paper”应改为“writing academic papers”，使用复数形式且去掉介词“on”；“write some daily daily lives on the journal”表达不自然，应改为“write about daily life in a journal”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is a convenient mode for me to finish my my paper or dessert desertations and.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is a convenient way for me to finish my paper or dissertations.

“my paper or dessert desertations”中“dessert desertations”拼写错误，应为“dissertations”，且“paper”通常指单篇论文，前文提到多篇应保持一致。

× Will I really keep Diaries? Because I don't have this hobby and I'm too busy to do this, But when I was a child, I like to keep Diaries for my daily life.

✓ Do I really keep diaries? Because I don't have this hobby and I'm too busy to do this, but when I was a child, I liked to keep diaries for my daily life.

“Will I really keep Diaries?”时态和语气不合适，应改为一般疑问句“Do I really keep diaries?”；“like”应改为过去时“liked”，因为描述的是过去的习惯；“Diaries”不需要大写。

× Well, I always use some apps to record my life in my smartphone, such as WeChat, because it's a convenient and easy way to write my daily life and everyone can watch it.

✓ Well, I always use some apps to record my life on my smartphone, such as WeChat, because it's a convenient and easy way to write about my daily life and everyone can see it.

“record my life in my smartphone”应改为“on my smartphone”，表示使用设备；“write my daily life”应改为“write about my daily life”，动词“write”后需加介词“about”；“watch it”改为“see it”，更符合表达内容。