Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在较多语法错误和重复填充词，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用"uh"和"um"，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: When I was in senior high school, I wrote a lot of notes during class. However, now I usually use my laptop to take notes, so I don't write as much by hand anymore.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构稍显简单，且有语法错误（如时态不一致）。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意时态一致。

예시: I usually write down my To Do List every morning after I arrive at the office because I believe it helps me organize my work more efficiently and improve my productivity.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议简化表达，明确主题，并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I think the things I write will change in the future. Instead of work-related notes, I might write more about my hobbies and personal interests.

제안: 回答中充满填充词，语法错误明显，表达不连贯。建议减少重复词汇，使用完整句子，并清晰表达观点。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it saves paper and allows me to easily correct mistakes.

제안: 回答不够明确且语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，避免重复填充词，并使用正确时态。

예시: When I was a student, I kept a diary once a week. But now, after starting work, I don't like writing diaries anymore.

제안: 回答中有较多重复词和语法错误，表达不够完整。建议使用连贯句子，补充第二种方法，并丰富细节。

예시: I usually use two methods to record my daily life. One is taking pictures of people and beautiful views, which helps me remember special moments. The other is writing short notes about my experiences.

× I need to write a lot of notes

✓ I needed to write a lot of notes

这里的时间是过去时态，表示过去的习惯动作，应该用过去式"needed"，而不是现在时"need"。

× when I was a Senior High School

✓ when I was in Senior High School

"Senior High School"前面需要介词"in"表示在某个阶段或地点。

× help me to, uh, takes note of everything

✓ help me to, uh, take note of everything

动词"take"在"help"后面应使用原形，不加-s。

× So currently it's not.

✓ So currently, I don't do that.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清晰。

× after I arrived the office

✓ after I arrived at the office

"arrive"后面需要介词"at"表示到达某地。

× I usually write down my To Do List in the morning after I arrived the office

✓ I usually write down my To Do List in the morning after I arrive at the office

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时"arrive"，并且"arrive"后面需要介词"at"。

× and also can help me improve the efficiency

✓ and it can also help me improve efficiency

缺少主语"it"，并且"also"的位置应在助动词后面。

× maybe in the future I would to write a down something

✓ maybe in the future I would write down something

情态动词"would"后面不加"to"，且"write down"是动词短语，不能拆开。

× instead of the related with the working

✓ instead of the things related to work

"related"后面应接介词"to"，且"working"用名词"work"更合适。

× I used to uh, typing instead of handwriting

✓ I used to uh, type instead of handwriting

"used to"后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词"typing"。

× if I made some mistake beside it also

✓ if I make some mistakes; besides, it also

"some mistake"应为复数"some mistakes"，且"beside"应为"besides"，表示此外。

× when I was a student, I, uh, keep the Diaries once a week

✓ when I was a student, I, uh, kept the diary once a week

描述过去习惯动作，动词应使用过去式"kept"，且"diaries"应为单数"diary"，表示一本日记。

× after I grow up and, uh, walk in the office

✓ after I grew up and, uh, started working in the office

"grow up"和"walk in the office"时态不一致，且"walk in the office"表达不准确，应改为"started working in the office"。

× I don't like, uh, writing diary

✓ I don't like, uh, writing diaries

"diary"应使用复数形式"diaries"，表示写日记的行为。

× I think the action may be more

✓ I think the action may be too much

"more"用法不当，表达过多应使用"too much"。

× I usually use two method to record my daily life

✓ I usually use two methods to record my daily life

"two"后面应接复数名词"methods"。

× I like taking picture, uh, of the people, uh, all beautiful views

✓ I like taking pictures of people and all beautiful views

"picture"应为复数"pictures"，且"of the people"中"the"不必要，且连接词应为"and"。