Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. For example, say 'I don't write a lot' instead of 'I'm not writing a lot'. Also, avoid vague pronouns like 'them' and use clear references. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I don't write a lot, but I prefer chatting because it is more comfortable and saves time.

제안: Be more specific and correct vocabulary. For example, use 'CVs' instead of 'CVS'. Also, explain clearly why writing is difficult. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I like to write letters, CVs, and appointments. However, I find writing difficult because it causes pain in my hand after a while.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Also, avoid repetition and be concise.

예시: Yes, my writing will change because over time I learn new things and improve how I express myself.

제안: Use correct pronouns and avoid redundancy. For example, use 'it' instead of 'them' when referring to typing. Also, combine sentences for better flow.

예시: I prefer typing because it is more comfortable and easier than handwriting, which often causes pain in my hand after writing many pages.

제안: Use plural form correctly and improve sentence flow. For example, say 'Diaries are a regular part of my life'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Diaries are a regular part of my life because they remind me of my daily activities and help me focus on my work and maintain discipline.

제안: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'I usually write diaries and sometimes use mobile notes to remind me of my tasks.'

예시: I usually write diaries and sometimes use mobile notes to remind me of my tasks. I find these methods very helpful for staying organized and disciplined.

× No, I'm not writing a lot, but I prefer chatting rather than writing because I feel them very comfortable and time saving.

✓ No, I don't write a lot, but I prefer chatting rather than writing because I find it very comfortable and time-saving.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm not writing' instead of the simple present 'I don't write' to express habitual action. Also, 'feel them' is incorrect; 'find it' is appropriate to express opinion about an activity. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective.

× No, I'm not writing a lot, but I prefer chatting rather than writing because I feel them very comfortable and time saving.

✓ No, I don't write a lot, but I prefer chatting rather than writing because I find it very comfortable and time-saving.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used to refer to an activity; the correct pronoun is 'it' for singular activities like 'chatting' or 'writing'.

× I like to write several things such as letters, CVS, appointments and other but I feel writing so difficult because after the writing I feel pain on hand.

✓ I like to write several things such as letters, CVs, appointments, and others, but I find writing very difficult because after writing I feel pain in my hand.

'CVS' should be pluralized as 'CVs'. 'Other' should be 'others' to match plural context. 'Feel writing so difficult' is incorrect; 'find writing very difficult' is the correct expression. 'Pain on hand' should be 'pain in my hand'.

× I like to write several things such as letters, CVS, appointments and other but I feel writing so difficult because after the writing I feel pain on hand.

✓ I like to write several things such as letters, CVs, appointments, and others, but I find writing very difficult because after writing I feel pain in my hand.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'pain'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to pain inside a body part.

× Yes, obviously that always change because whenever time goes out I know new things and I know how to express well how to write well. Then my writing style will change over my experience.

✓ Yes, obviously it always changes because as time goes by I learn new things and I know how to express myself well and how to write well. Then my writing style will change with my experience.

'That always change' should be 'it always changes' to agree in number and tense. 'Whenever time goes out' is incorrect; 'as time goes by' is the correct expression. 'I know how to express well how to write well' is awkward; 'I know how to express myself well and how to write well' is clearer. 'Over my experience' should be 'with my experience'.

× Yes, obviously that always change because whenever time goes out I know new things and I know how to express well how to write well. Then my writing style will change over my experience.

✓ Yes, obviously it always changes because as time goes by I learn new things and I know how to express myself well and how to write well. Then my writing style will change with my experience.

The verb 'change' must agree with the singular subject 'it'; therefore, it should be 'changes'.

× I prefer typing because I find them comfortable and easy rather than handwriting because handwriting is a painful task.

✓ I prefer typing because I find it comfortable and easy rather than handwriting because handwriting is a painful task.

'Them' is incorrectly used to refer to 'typing', which is singular; the correct pronoun is 'it'.

× After the many pages of handwriting, I feel pain in my hand, that's why I don't like it.

✓ After many pages of handwriting, I feel pain in my hand; that's why I don't like it.

'The many pages' is incorrect; 'many pages' is the correct plural form without 'the' in this context.

× Diary is a regular part of my life. I like to write Diaries because it reminds me what I do during my day and it helps me to focus on my works and also my discipline.

✓ Diary is a regular part of my life. I like to write diaries because it reminds me of what I do during my day and it helps me to focus on my work and also my discipline.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless starting a sentence. 'Works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is uncountable and should be singular. 'Reminds me what I do' should be 'reminds me of what I do'.

× I like to write Diaries because it reminds me what I do during my day and it helps me to focus on my works and also my discipline.

✓ I like to write diaries because it reminds me of what I do during my day and it helps me to focus on my work and also my discipline.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' when indicating what is being remembered.

× I usually write Diaries and sometimes I use mobile notes to remind my work or something. But usually I use Diaries for discipline and reminding work purpose and I can I I think they're very beneficial for our work.

✓ I usually write diaries and sometimes I use mobile notes to remind me of my work or something. But usually I use diaries for discipline and to remind me of work purposes, and I think they're very beneficial for our work.

'Diaries' should be lowercase. 'Remind my work' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me of my work'. 'Reminding work purpose' is awkward; 'to remind me of work purposes' is correct. Removed repeated 'I'.