Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I used to write a lot when I was young because of schoolwork and exams. However, at university, I write less since most tasks are done on computers.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不够准确，句子结构稍显混乱，建议使用更准确的词汇并注意句子连贯性。

예시: I usually write essays and assignments, but sometimes I keep a diary to record my thoughts and feelings.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意时态一致性和句子完整性，增强表达的逻辑性。

예시: Yes, I wrote less when I was young, mostly homework because I was required to. Now, I write more personal reflections as I get older.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有口语化表达“you know”，建议使用更正式的表达，避免口语词汇。

예시: Although I type frequently, I prefer handwriting because it reflects a person's personality and feels more personal and meaningful.

제안: 回答较好，但“Diaries”应为复数形式“diary”，建议注意名词单复数和表达的准确性。

예시: I keep a diary almost every day before going to sleep. It helps me reflect on myself and plan for the next day.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，使用连词使表达更连贯。

예시: Sometimes I take photos or videos of special moments and post them on my personal app, which serves as a digital diary.

× Yes, I think when I was young there was so many schoolwork and housework and examination for me, so I need to write a lot.

✓ Yes, I think when I was young there was so much schoolwork and housework and examinations for me, so I needed to write a lot.

schoolwork 和 housework 是不可数名词，前面应使用 much 而非 many；examination 应使用复数 examinations，因为指多个考试；时态应保持过去时，need 改为 needed。

× So I write less, more.

✓ So I write less now.

句子中 more 用法不当，表达减少写作量应使用 less；句子应简洁明确。

× I think most of the thing I write is my essays and my assignments, but sometimes I do write some Diaries or just write down my minds, my things at the moment.

✓ I think most of the things I write are my essays and my assignments, but sometimes I do write some diaries or just write down my thoughts, my feelings at the moment.

thing 应为复数 things；主谓一致，things 对应复数动词 are；Diaries 应小写 diaries；minds 用法不当，改为 thoughts 或 feelings 更合适。

× Yes, I think when I was young I write less.

✓ Yes, I think when I was young I wrote less.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去时 wrote。

× I write things like the homework, the schoolwork and which I was urged to do that.

✓ I wrote things like homework and schoolwork which I was urged to do.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的定冠词 the，去掉多余的 that，使句子通顺。

× But as I as I get older, I write more things to reflect on my own.

✓ But as I get older, I write more things to reflect on my own.

句中重复了 as I，应删除重复部分。

× Although I do a lot on typing, I prefer to write by hand because I think, you know, people's handwriting can reflect their minds and their personality, and I think it's more personalized and it's more meaningful.

✓ Although I do a lot of typing, I prefer to write by hand because I think, you know, people's handwriting can reflect their minds and their personalities, and I think it's more personalized and more meaningful.

短语应为 do a lot of typing；personality 应用复数 personalities，因为指多个人的个性；去掉重复的 it's。

× Well, almost every day I keep Diaries before I go to sleep.

✓ Well, almost every day I keep a diary before I go to sleep.

diary 是可数名词，保持单数形式；前面加不定冠词 a。

× I think it's a great way to reflect on myself and to make plans for the next of the day.

✓ I think it's a great way to reflect on myself and to make plans for the next day.

短语应为 for the next day，去掉多余的 of。

× Sometimes I will take photos for some special moment or just want to memorize my precious time and sometimes I will take some videos as well and I will post them to my to my personal app.

✓ Sometimes I will take photos of some special moments or just want to remember my precious times and sometimes I will take some videos as well and I will post them to my personal app.

take photos 应用介词 of 而非 for；moment 和 time 应用复数形式 moments 和 times；memorize 用法不当，改为 remember；去掉重复的 to my。