Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误（如复数形式错误）和表达不够简洁。建议注意主谓一致，避免冗余，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot because, as a university student, I have to complete many academic reports to achieve good grades. Additionally, I keep a journal to reflect on my thoughts.

제안: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词如“but”后应有完整句子，并丰富细节说明原因。

예시: I used to enjoy keeping a diary and writing fictional novels, but now, as a university student, I devote most of my time to academic essays because they help improve my research skills.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Absolutely. When I was a child, I kept a diary to record my daily activities, but now I write mainly for academic purposes, which requires different writing styles.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法和用词错误，如“in the most of time”和“help for to post”。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词。

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have a tight deadline, typing is more convenient and efficient. However, most of the time, I prefer handwriting because it helps me better organize my thoughts.

제안: 回答中时态错误明显，表达不够清晰，且“join the aims”不合适。建议注意时态变化，表达具体频率，并使用恰当词汇。

예시: I used to keep a diary every day to record my daily activities. Since entering university, I have less time, so I usually summarize my week instead.

제안: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“had eat”和“had go”。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。

예시: I mostly take pictures to document my life, like what I eat during the week and places I visit while traveling. I also keep a diary to record important events.

× Definitely. As a university students, I have a lot of course work to write in my daily life.

✓ Definitely. As a university student, I have a lot of coursework to write in my daily life.

“students”是复数形式，但这里指的是单个学生，应使用单数“student”。“course work”应写作一个词“coursework”，表示课程作业。

× In the past, I prefer to keep a diary and write novels which is fictional, but now as a university students, I devoted most of my time on academic essays which enhance my ability in research.

✓ In the past, I preferred to keep a diary and write novels which are fictional, but now as a university student, I devote most of my time to academic essays which enhance my ability in research.

“students”应为单数“student”。“novels which is fictional”中“novels”是复数，谓语应用复数“are”。“prefer”时态应与过去时间状语一致，改为“preferred”。“devoted”时态应与现在时间一致，改为“devote”。“on academic essays”应改为“to academic essays”。

× Absolutely, when I was a child I keep the diary to write down what I have done in the days, but now I write for the aim of Academy, which varies from writing styles.

✓ Absolutely, when I was a child I kept a diary to write down what I had done in the days, but now I write for academic purposes, which vary in writing styles.

过去时间应使用过去式“kept”。“have done”应改为过去完成时“had done”，表示过去某时间之前完成的动作。“the diary”改为不定冠词“a diary”。“aim of Academy”表达不准确，改为“academic purposes”。“which varies”中的“which”指代复数，应改为“which vary”。

× In the past, I keep Diaries every day to write down what I have done in the day. After I entering university, I don't have so much time, so I just conclude the week and join the aims.

✓ In the past, I kept diaries every day to write down what I had done in the day. After entering university, I don't have much time, so I just summarize the week and set goals.

“keep”应为过去式“kept”。“Diaries”不需要大写。“After I entering university”结构错误，应改为“After entering university”。“so much time”改为“much time”。“conclude the week”表达不准确，改为“summarize the week”。“join the aims”表达不当，改为“set goals”。

× Mostly I take a picture of my life such as what I had eat in a week and where I had go in my travel.

✓ Mostly I take pictures of my life such as what I have eaten in a week and where I have gone in my travels.

“had eat”应为现在完成时“have eaten”。“had go”应为现在完成时“have gone”。“a picture”改为复数“pictures”，更符合语境。

× Mostly I take a picture of my life such as what I had eat in a week and where I had go in my travel.

✓ Mostly I take pictures of my life such as what I have eaten in a week and where I have gone in my travels.

“a picture”应为复数“pictures”，因为描述的是多次拍摄的行为。

× But in the most of time, I think handwriting is more tangible way which help for to post my thoughts.

✓ But most of the time, I think handwriting is a more tangible way which helps me to express my thoughts.

“in the most of time”应为“most of the time”。“more tangible way”前应加冠词“a”。“help for to post”结构错误，应改为“helps me to express”。