Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ 'a lot' nhiều lần. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn viết những gì và tại sao việc viết đó quan trọng với bạn.

예시: Yes, I write quite frequently, especially because I am a university student. I usually prepare outlines and draft essays to organize my thoughts before assignments.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích rõ bạn thích viết gì và lý do cụ thể. Hãy tránh dùng từ không phù hợp và nói rõ hơn về sở thích viết của bạn.

예시: I like to write notes during lectures because they help me remember important information. Taking notes quickly allows me to review and study effectively later.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần dùng từ chính xác hơn và câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách suy nghĩ và viết của bạn thay đổi theo thời gian.

예시: Yes, I believe my writing changes over time because my thoughts and motivations evolve. For example, what I write now might differ from what I would write in the future as I gain new experiences.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, so sánh ưu nhược điểm của việc gõ máy tính và viết tay, và giải thích sở thích hiện tại của bạn một cách mạch lạc.

예시: When I was a child, I preferred handwriting because I wasn't good at typing. However, now as a university student, I often type my notes because it is faster and more convenient.

제안: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'drive' thay vì 'write'. Bạn nên nói rõ tần suất và mục đích viết nhật ký hoặc ghi chú của bạn.

예시: I keep a diary about three times a week, especially when I learn new things. Writing helps me remember important details and reflect on my progress.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm từ vựng như 'dock' thay vì 'doc' hoặc 'document', 'dictator' thay vì 'dictation' hoặc 'voice recorder'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ chính xác và giải thích cụ thể các phương pháp bạn dùng để ghi lại cuộc sống.

예시: Besides writing, I also use a voice recorder app on my phone to capture my thoughts. This way, I can review and remember important moments without missing anything.

× I often write a lot of things because I'm a currently university student so I need to make an outline before going to do some job sometimes in my essays.

✓ I often write a lot of things because I'm currently a university student, so I need to make an outline before doing some work sometimes in my essays.

The phrase 'I'm a currently university student' has incorrect word order; 'currently' should come before 'a university student'. Also, 'going to do some job' is awkward; 'doing some work' is more natural. The verb form after 'before' should be gerund ('doing') not infinitive ('to do').

× I often write a lot of things because I'm a currently university student so I need to make an outline before going to do some job sometimes in my essays.

✓ I often write many things because I'm currently a university student, so I need to make an outline before doing some work sometimes in my essays.

The quantifier 'a lot of' is usually used with uncountable nouns or plural countable nouns. 'Things' is plural countable, so 'a lot of things' is acceptable, but 'some job' is incorrect; 'some work' is better because 'work' is uncountable. Also, 'a currently university student' is incorrect; 'currently' should not be between 'a' and 'university student'. The correct phrase is 'currently a university student'.

× I give so much appreciations to write some notes that are really important to me because I you know, when I go to school and I need to quickly take notes what my teacher says.

✓ I give so much appreciation to writing some notes that are really important to me because, you know, when I go to school I need to quickly take notes of what my teacher says.

'Appreciations' is incorrect; 'appreciation' is uncountable and should not be plural. Also, 'give appreciation to write' is awkward; 'give appreciation to writing' or better 'appreciate writing' is more natural. The phrase 'take notes what my teacher says' is missing the preposition 'of' after 'notes'.

× I need to quickly take notes what my teacher says.

✓ I need to quickly take notes of what my teacher says.

The verb phrase 'take notes' requires the preposition 'of' before the object clause. Without 'of', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× So I need to rise a lot and I also want.

✓ So I need to write a lot and I also want to.

The word 'rise' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'write'. 'Rise' means to get up or increase, which does not fit the context.

× When is I was a child, I referred to handwriting smaller than more than writing computers because like I, I'm not good at typing in this time.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred handwriting more than typing on computers because, like I said, I wasn't good at typing at that time.

The phrase 'When is I was a child' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was a child'. 'Referred to handwriting smaller than more than writing computers' is confusing and incorrect; the intended meaning is 'preferred handwriting more than typing on computers'. 'In this time' should be 'at that time' to refer to the past.

× I need to take notes and drive in my Diaries.

✓ I need to take notes and write in my diaries.

The verb 'drive' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'write'. Also, 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× I will open a dock and then take note sometimes.

✓ I will open a doc and then take notes sometimes.

The word 'dock' is likely a typo for 'doc' (document). Also, 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' to mean writing multiple notes.

× I record my life in dictator in the dark and I want to make sure that everything will not will not be met, will not be missed saying so yeah, I just keep following this way.

✓ I record my life using a dictaphone in the dark and I want to make sure that nothing will be missed, so yeah, I just keep following this way.

'Dictator' is incorrect; the intended word is 'dictaphone' or 'voice recorder'. The phrase 'will not will not be met' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'nothing will be missed'. The phrase 'missed saying' is incorrect; 'missed' alone suffices.