Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免无关内容，并注意语法正确。

예시: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer taking photos to capture important moments.

제안: 回答重复且缺乏丰富内容。建议直接回答问题并提供具体原因，避免重复。

예시: I like writing essays during exams because it helps me improve my writing skills and achieve good grades.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议用简单句表达观点，并说明原因。

예시: Yes, I believe my writing will improve as I grow older and gain more experience.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达偏好并给出理由。

예시: I prefer handwriting because I have been used to writing on paper since I was a child.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题并说明原因，避免多余词汇。

예시: I never keep a diary because I prefer taking photos to remember important moments.

제안: 表达不够连贯，句子结构混乱。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明方法。

예시: I usually take photos to record my life because they help me remember moments vividly when I look at them later.

× No, I don't think so because I'm not a person who likes rides a lot.

✓ No, I don't think so because I'm not a person who likes riding a lot.

这里动词like后面应该接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事，故将rides改为riding。

× Maybe I will write when I take an exam.

✓ Maybe I write when I take an exam.

这里表达习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，去掉will。

× Maybe I usually write some essays when I take an exam because I need to get a high score.

✓ I usually write some essays when I take an exam because I need to get a high score.

句首的Maybe不合适，表达习惯动作时用一般现在时，去掉Maybe。

× Yes, I think the things I write could would change because during my life and during my age I increase and my writing skills will have a good increase and I will write a lot of things.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write could change because during my life and as I grow older, my writing skills will improve and I will write a lot of things.

could和would不能连用，选择could即可；句子结构混乱，调整表达使其更通顺。

× Maybe handwriting because I usually write something down in the paper when I was writing because I suit it.

✓ Maybe handwriting because I usually write something down on paper when I write because it suits me.

时态不一致，习惯动作用一般现在时；介词用on paper；suit用第三人称单数形式。

× I think I write down in the paper when I was a child and for a long time.

✓ I think I wrote on paper when I was a child and for a long time.

描述过去动作，应该用过去时wrote；介词用on paper。

× And I never keep Diaries because I think I can take some photos to memorize some important things. I needn't write down it.

✓ I never keep diaries because I think I can take some photos to remember some important things. I don't need to write them down.

diaries不需要大写；memorize用法不当，改为remember；write down后面接代词them而非it；否定形式用don't need to。

× Maybe it will be a picture in my phone.

✓ Maybe it will be a picture on my phone.

表示“在手机上”应使用介词on而非in。

× Actually take photos or other methods I use to record my life because I think it's vivid for me to exhibit something to me and I will remember it for a long time when I see the pictures.

✓ Actually, I take photos or use other methods to record my life because I think it's vivid for me to show something to myself and I will remember it for a long time when I see the pictures.

句子缺少主语，调整句子结构使其完整；exhibit用法不当，改为show；to me改为to myself更合适。