Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。例えば、「I don't write Wrote」は意味が通じません。より自然な表現を使い、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

예시: No, I don't write a lot because I prefer reading. Reading makes me feel relaxed, but writing tires me.

제안: 内容が繰り返しで冗長です。より具体的な理由や例を加え、論理的に話を展開しましょう。

예시: I like to write because it helps me remember new vocabulary. For example, when I write sentences using new words, I can recall them better later.

제안: 文法と表現に改善の余地があります。過去と現在の違いを明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

예시: Yes, the things I write have changed over time. When I was a child, I wrote about what happened each day, but now I write sentences for novels.

제안: 理由が少し単調なので、もう少し具体的な説明や比較を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I can write faster and it allows me to express my emotions more clearly through my writing style.

제안: 同じ内容が繰り返されているので、簡潔にまとめ、他の活動について具体的に述べると良いです。

예시: I don't keep diaries often because I'm busy with work. Instead, I prefer to spend my free time on hobbies like reading or exercising.

제안: 回答は自然ですが、もう少し具体的な例や理由を加えるとより良くなります。

예시: I use pictures to record my life because it's easy and convenient. For example, I take photos of special moments or beautiful places whenever I want.

× No, I don't write Wrote because I like reading.

✓ No, I don't write because I like reading.

The word 'Wrote' is incorrectly used here; it is the past tense of 'write' and does not fit the present tense context. The sentence should use the present tense 'write' to match the question and meaning.

× Reading makes me feel comfortable, but writing is tiring me.

✓ Reading makes me feel comfortable, but writing tires me.

The phrase 'writing is tiring me' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'tire' should be used in the simple present tense 'tires' to express a general feeling.

× Writings lead to remember a variety of words.

✓ Writing helps me remember a variety of words.

The plural 'Writings' is incorrect here; 'writing' as an uncountable noun is appropriate. Also, 'lead to remember' is incorrect; 'helps me remember' is the correct expression.

× Human beings remember words by writing.

✓ People remember words by writing.

While 'Human beings' is not grammatically wrong, it is unnatural in this context. 'People' is more natural and commonly used.

× I wrote What happened Today when I was a kid, but now I write sentences for novels.

✓ I wrote about what happened today when I was a kid, but now I write sentences for novels.

The phrase 'I wrote What happened Today' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'about' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'Today' should be lowercase unless it starts a sentence.

× I prefer handwriting to typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing.

This sentence is correct; 'prefer A to B' is the correct structure.

× I can write words faster by handwriting.

✓ I can write words faster by handwriting.

This sentence is acceptable, but 'with handwriting' or 'by hand' might be more natural. However, it is not a grammatical error.

× I can express my emotion by handwriting.

✓ I can express my emotions through handwriting.

'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' and 'by handwriting' is better expressed as 'through handwriting' to indicate the means.

× No, I don't write Diaries because I'm busy at work.

✓ No, I don't write diaries because I'm busy at work.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized and is correct in plural form here.

× So I can't keep Diaries.

✓ So I can't keep diaries.

Same as above, 'diaries' should be lowercase.

× I want to use my time to other activities.

✓ I want to use my time for other activities.

The correct preposition after 'use my time' is 'for', not 'to'.