Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“teach”应为“taught”，“dairy”应为“diary”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确单词，并简洁表达。

예시: Yes, I write a lot because my parents taught me to keep a diary when I was a child. It helps me record creative ideas and thoughts, and I have maintained this habit until now.

제안: 回答中表达不够流畅，存在语法错误，如“forms”应为“form”，且句子较长且重复。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并避免重复表达。

예시: I don't prefer a specific form of writing. I usually record my daily life and creative ideas, and sometimes I write poems to relieve stress.

제안: 回答较完整，但句子较长且部分表达不够自然。建议分句表达，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Not really. I have maintained the habit of writing my thoughts for a long time. It helps me relieve stress and improve my writing skills, so I plan to continue without changes.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子断裂，缺少具体细节。建议补充完整句子，提供具体原因，并使用连词使表达连贯。

예시: I prefer handwriting for several reasons. Firstly, it helps me remember urgent and important thoughts better. Secondly, handwriting allows me to express my feelings more personally and creatively.

× Yes, when I was a child my parents teach me to keep dairy, which is a good way for me to write down something creative or good ideas and I keep this habit for now.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my parents taught me to keep a diary, which was a good way for me to write down something creative or good ideas and I have kept this habit until now.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词teach应该用过去式taught。keep dairy中的dairy应为diary（日记）。keep this habit for now应改为have kept this habit until now，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

× Yes, when I was a child my parents teach me to keep dairy, which is a good way for me to write down something creative or good ideas and I keep this habit for now.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my parents taught me to keep a diary, which was a good way for me to write down some creative or good ideas and I have kept this habit until now.

something creative or good ideas中something与ideas搭配不当，应使用some来修饰复数名词ideas。

× There's not a specific forms that I would like to write, I just keep recording of my daily life and record some creative ideas and sometimes I write poems as well to relieve myself, relieve my stress.

✓ There aren't specific forms that I would like to write; I just keep a record of my daily life and record some creative ideas, and sometimes I write poems as well to relieve myself and relieve my stress.

There is缩写为There's后面接复数名词forms不正确，应使用There aren't。recording of my daily life应改为a record of my daily life，表达更准确。句子中缺少连接词，使用分号或and连接更合适。

× There's not a specific forms that I would like to write, I just keep recording of my daily life and record some creative ideas and sometimes I write poems as well to relieve myself, relieve my stress.

✓ There aren't specific forms that I would like to write; I just keep a record of my daily life and record some creative ideas, and sometimes I write poems as well to relieve myself and relieve my stress.

specific forms是复数，前面用there is不匹配，应改为there are。

× Not really, because I have maintained the habit of writing what I thought for a long time and it was really a good way for me to relieve my stress and improve my writing skills. So I will keep doing this without any changes.

✓ Not really, because I have maintained the habit of writing what I think for a long time and it is really a good way for me to relieve my stress and improve my writing skills. So I will keep doing this without any changes.

写作习惯是现在仍在进行的动作，thought应改为think，was改为is，保持时态一致。

× I prefer handwriting for several reasons. Firstly, handwriting is a good habit to repeat what we thought is urgent and important. Secondly, handwriting is a good way to express our. Feelings through.

✓ I prefer handwriting for several reasons. Firstly, handwriting is a good habit to help repeat what we think is urgent and important. Secondly, handwriting is a good way to express our feelings.

to repeat后面缺少介词help来表达“帮助重复”，句子不完整。最后一句中“express our. Feelings through.”不完整，应合并并去掉through。