Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, explain clearly what you write and why, using correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I am a researcher. I usually write about my experiments, starting with creating models and then analyzing the results. This helps me prepare invitations for conferences.

제안: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: I like to write research papers because they allow me to document my models and experiments. By writing, I can identify mistakes and evaluate my results before presenting them at conferences.

제안: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to explain the process logically. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I often revise my writing. After completing my research papers, I evaluate the results and correct any mistakes before submitting them to conferences.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific reasons. Also, correct minor grammatical errors for naturalness.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it is easier to spot and correct mistakes. Moreover, writing by hand helps me evaluate my work more carefully.

× I need to write more and more complication experiment.

✓ I need to write more and more complicated experiments.

The word 'complication' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'experiment'. The correct adjective is 'complicated'. Also, 'experiment' should be plural as it refers to multiple experiments.

× So first I'm writing these model and then analyzing after that invitations.

✓ So first I'm writing these models and then analyzing, after that invitations.

The noun 'model' should be plural 'models' to agree with 'these'. The sentence structure is awkward; adding a comma improves clarity. 'Invitations' seems out of context but is kept as is.

× I like to write my research paper because in research paper so many corrections are related to the models and system.

✓ I like to write my research paper because in research papers so many corrections are related to the models and systems.

'Research paper' should be plural 'research papers' to indicate generality. 'System' should be plural 'systems' to match 'models' and the plural context.

× So when I writing these all models and experiment then we check the mistake and after that we easily evaluate my result and proceeding for any of conference.

✓ So when I am writing all these models and experiments, then we check the mistakes and after that we easily evaluate my results and proceed for any conference.

The verb 'writing' needs the auxiliary 'am' to form present continuous tense. 'Experiment' should be plural 'experiments'. 'Mistake' should be plural 'mistakes'. 'Result' should be plural 'results' to match context. 'Proceeding' should be 'proceed' to maintain verb form consistency. 'Any of conference' should be 'any conference'.

× According to me when I write anything related to my research, then after writing I evaluate my result and change the some mistake before proceeding any of conference.

✓ According to me, when I write anything related to my research, then after writing I evaluate my results and change some mistakes before proceeding to any conference.

'Result' should be plural 'results'. 'The some mistake' is incorrect; 'some mistakes' is correct. 'Proceeding any of conference' should be 'proceeding to any conference'. Added comma after 'According to me' for clarity.

× I prefer handwriting when I am writing because this is the easy way to correct some mistake and easily evaluate it.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I am writing because this is the easy way to correct some mistakes and easily evaluate them.

'Mistake' should be plural 'mistakes'. 'It' is unclear; 'them' refers to 'mistakes' correctly.