Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如时态混用和词汇选择不当。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复和不准确的表达，使回答更简洁流畅。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy writing and sometimes keep a diary. When I was a child, I even wrote a novel by myself. Although it was never published, it gave me a great sense of accomplishment and satisfaction.

제안: 回答内容较为笼统，表达不够连贯，且存在语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明写作的内容和原因。

예시: I like to write about beautiful moments and wonderful experiences because it helps me remember them. Moreover, writing is a good way to relax and relieve stress.

제안: 回答中有较多口头语和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的时态和词汇，结构更紧凑。

예시: Yes, I think what I write has changed. When I was a child, I usually wrote about specific facts or events I had experienced. Now, I prefer to write about my emotions and feelings at the moment.

제안: 回答较为完整，但部分表达不够准确，如“it's sometimes becomes amazing”不符合语法。建议注意语法准确性，使用更恰当的词汇表达情感变化。

예시: Of course, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and magical. When I write by hand, the words seem to come alive, and I can recognize my emotions through my writing style. For example, when I'm calm, my handwriting is neat, but when I'm stressed, it becomes more hurried and messy.

× when I'm a child I even wrote a novel by myself

✓ when I was a child I even wrote a novel by myself

这里描述的是过去的时间点“当我还是个孩子的时候”，应该使用过去时态“was”而不是现在时态“am”。

× although it didn't pop, it doesn't, it didn't public

✓ although it didn't get published

这里想表达“它没有被出版”，应该使用过去时态的被动语态“didn't get published”，原句中“didn't pop”和“didn't public”用词错误且时态混乱。

× I sometimes write Diaries

✓ I sometimes write diaries

“diaries”作为普通名词不需要大写，且在此处复数形式正确，但首字母应小写。

× writing is a good way to record the beautiful moment, wonderful times and things you like and emotional you have just experienced

✓ writing is a good way to record the beautiful moments, wonderful times, things you like and emotions you have just experienced

“moment”应为复数“moments”，且“emotional”是形容词，需改为名词“emotions”以匹配句意。

× And writing is a good way to relax yourself. Also release your stress.

✓ And writing is a good way to relax yourself and also release your stress.

第二句缺少主语和谓语，应该与前一句合并，形成完整句子。

× when I was a child, I usually like to write

✓ when I was a child, I usually liked to write

描述过去习惯时应使用过去时态“liked”，而不是现在时“like”。

× things, uh, specific fact or the event I had just experienced

✓ things, uh, specific facts or events I had just experienced

“fact”和“event”应使用复数形式“facts”和“events”，以匹配前面的“things”。

× my feelings about the exact time

✓ my feelings about the current time

“exact time”用法不当，表达“此刻”应使用“current time”。

× When I write by my hand

✓ When I write by hand

习惯用法是“write by hand”，不加“my”。

× it's sometimes becomes amazing

✓ it sometimes becomes amazing

副词“sometimes”应放在助动词“does”或动词“becomes”之前，不能放在“it's”后面。