Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'ride' thay vì 'write', 'academic purpose' nên là 'academic purposes'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially for academic purposes and everyday tasks. For example, I usually take notes in class and write reminders in my notebook. This helps me remember important things and stay organized.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'Actually, it depends on my mood'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi như 'process my phone' không đúng nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Actually, it depends on my mood. When I'm feeling happy and cheerful, I like to write funny stories and jokes because they help me express my joy. However, when I'm sad or upset, I usually write in my diary or personal reflections to process my feelings.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi lặp từ ('knowledge and knowledge'). Bạn nên hoàn thành câu cuối cùng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và đầy đủ hơn.

예시: Yes, I think the things I write change depending on my mood and knowledge. For example, when I feel confident and knowledgeable, I tend to write detailed and thoughtful content. However, if I'm too tired, my writing might be shorter and less detailed.

제안: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ như 'In my opinion, I do' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: In my opinion, it depends on the situation and my schedule. If I am very busy, I usually prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient. However, when I have free time, I like handwriting because it helps me remember information better and feels more personal.

× Yes, I ride quite a lot, especially in academic purpose and everyday task.

✓ Yes, I write quite a lot, especially for academic purposes and everyday tasks.

The verb 'ride' is incorrect here; it should be 'write'. Also, 'in academic purpose' should be 'for academic purposes' and 'everyday task' should be plural 'everyday tasks' to match the context.

× This help me to remember important things writing also.

✓ This helps me to remember important things and writing as well.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'and writing as well' clarifies the meaning.

× Actually is depend on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' and the verb should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject. Adding a comma after 'Actually' improves readability.

× When I'm feeling really happy and and cheerful, I like to write funny stories and jokes because it help me express my joy.

✓ When I'm feeling really happy and cheerful, I like to write funny stories and jokes because it helps me express my joy.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, there is a repeated word 'and' which should be removed.

× It's help me process my phone.

✓ It helps me process my thoughts.

'It's' should be 'It' and the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject. 'Process my phone' is incorrect; likely intended 'process my thoughts'.

× Yes, I think that the things I write would change depending on my mood and knowledge and knowledge.

✓ Yes, I think that the things I write would change depending on my mood and knowledge.

The phrase 'and knowledge' is repeated unnecessarily; removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× And for example, when I'm feel confident and knowledgeable, I tend to write some detailed and thoughtful content.

✓ For example, when I feel confident and knowledgeable, I tend to write some detailed and thoughtful content.

'I'm feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel'. Also, starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be omitted.

× However, if I'm too tired.

✓ However, if I'm too tired, I usually don't write much.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause. Adding a main clause completes the sentence.

× In my opinion, I do.

✓ In my opinion, it depends on the situation and my schedule.

The sentence 'I do' is incomplete and unclear. Replacing it with a complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× However, when I have a free time, I like handwriting because it helps me remember information better and feels more personal.

✓ However, when I have free time, I like handwriting because it helps me remember information better and feels more personal.

'A free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article.