Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
Yes, I write a lot because it is a part of my job. I also like to write in my journal to think about my day. Writing helps me remember what I learned in the university.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
I like writing in a journal because it helps me think about my day. It's a private space where I can write whatever I want and I enjoy looking back at what I have liked to see how I have changed.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
Yes, I think my writing will change as I get older. My experience and views will change and that will affect what I write about. Also, new technology may change how I write.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
I like handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my my. I also find it helps me remember things better. Writing with a pen or pencil is a nice experience for me.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构较简单，缺少连接词使得内容显得有些分散。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强连贯性，并适当丰富细节。
예시: Yes, I write a lot because it is an essential part of my job, and I also enjoy keeping a journal to reflect on my day. This practice helps me remember what I have learned at university and improves my writing skills.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容重复且有语法错误（如“what I have liked”应为“what I have written”），缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词如“because”、“and”，并避免重复。
예시: I like writing in my journal because it provides a private space where I can freely express my thoughts. Moreover, I enjoy looking back at my entries to see how I have changed over time.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较完整且逻辑清晰，但可以使用更多连接词如“because”、“therefore”来增强连贯性，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。
예시: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I get older because my experiences and perspectives will evolve. Therefore, the topics I write about will differ, and advances in technology might also influence the way I write.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中出现重复词汇“my my”，影响表达清晰度。内容较简单，缺少连接词和具体细节。建议注意语法和词汇准确性，使用连接词如“because”、“and”，并丰富细节。
예시: I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my thoughts, and I find that it helps me remember information better. Additionally, writing with a pen or pencil provides a pleasant and tactile experience.
문법
× What do you like to write?
✓ What do you like writing?
在英语中，动词like后面接动名词（-ing形式）表示喜欢做某事。原句中使用不定式to write不符合习惯用法，应改为动名词形式writing。
× I enjoy looking back at what I have liked to see how I have changed.
✓ I enjoy looking back at what I have liked to see how I have changed.
原句中“have liked to see”结构不正确，应该是“have written”或“have liked”中的一种。根据上下文，应该是“have written”，表示回顾自己写过的内容。
× I enjoy looking back at what I have liked to see how I have changed.
✓ I enjoy looking back at what I have written to see how I have changed.
动词like后面接动词不定式to see不合适，应改为不定式to see表示目的。这里的错误是动词形式使用不当，应改为“have written”表示过去完成时。
× I like handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my my.
✓ I like handwriting because it makes me feel more connected to my mind.
原句中“my my”是重复错误，应为“my mind”或其他合适名词。这里是单复数或词汇错误，需更正为正确词汇。
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