Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“seldomly”应为“seldom”，“rememberable”应为“memorable”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: No, I seldom write, only when I experience something memorable. For example, I like to write about remarkable events to help me remember them.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复，如“day life”应为“daily life”，“downwards man”表达不明确。建议用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

예시: I prefer to write about memorable experiences rather than my daily life because I find my daily routine quite boring. For instance, I like to write about important events like exams or travels.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, definitely. What I write changes as I grow and my thoughts evolve over time. For example, my opinions about people and the world have changed a lot.

제안: 回答中有重复和口语填充词，语法错误如“writing on paper are”应为“writing on paper is”。建议减少重复，使用更准确的表达。

예시: I prefer handwriting because writing on paper feels more personal and helps me remember things better. For example, I find it easier to recall information when I write it by hand.

× No, I just write seldomly and just in some rememberable things.

✓ No, I just seldom write and only in some memorable things.

副词'seldom'应放在动词前，'just'和'seldomly'的位置不当。'rememberable'应为'memorable'，表示值得记忆的。

× No, I just write seldomly and just in some rememberable things.

✓ No, I just seldom write and only in some memorable things.

'seldomly'不是正确的副词形式，应使用'seldom'。'rememberable'应改为'memorable'，形容词用法错误。

× So writing just a tool to remember something special.

✓ So writing is just a tool to remember something special.

句子缺少谓语动词'is'，导致句子结构不完整。

× I like to write memorable things rather than my daily life.

✓ I like to write memorable things rather than about my daily life.

'rather than'后面应接名词或动名词短语，'my daily life'前应加介词'about'使表达更准确。

× One major reason is that I think my day life is too boring and just downwards man.

✓ One major reason is that I think my daily life is too boring and just depressing.

'day life'应为'daily life'，'downwards man'表达不当，改为'depressing'更符合语境。

× Remembering and memorable things like examination or travel.

✓ Memorable things like examinations or travel.

'Remembering'用法不当，且'examination'应复数，表达更准确。

× Remembering and memorable things like examination or travel.

✓ Memorable things like examinations or travel.

'examination'应使用复数形式'examinations'，因为指多个事件。

× Yes, definitely. I think things might I write would change with the change of myself, with the part of the time my idea and thought would change all all over the world.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think the things I write might change as I change; over time, my ideas and thoughts will change as well.

原句结构混乱，语序错误，需调整语序和连接词使句子通顺。

× Yes, definitely. I think things might I write would change with the change of myself, with the part of the time my idea and thought would change all all over the world.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think the things I write might change as I change; over time, my ideas and thoughts will change as well.

'things might I write'语序错误，应为'the things I write might'。

× And for example, I usually think person.

✓ For example, I usually think about people.

句子不完整且表达不清，缺少介词'about'，'person'应为复数'people'。

× For me, I prefer handwriting when I am when I am writing because I think this uh, writing on paper are more memorable and it results in something you can really touch.

✓ For me, I prefer handwriting when I am writing because I think that writing on paper is more memorable and results in something you can really touch.

'writing on paper are'主谓不一致，应为'is'。重复'when I am'应删除多余部分。

× For me, I prefer handwriting when I am when I am writing because I think this uh, writing on paper are more memorable and it results in something you can really touch.

✓ For me, I prefer handwriting when I am writing because I think that writing on paper is more memorable and results in something you can really touch.

'writing on paper'为单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'is'，而非'are'。

× For example, if I experience something remarkable, I will write something to remember this.

✓ For example, if I experience something remarkable, I will write something to remember it.

'remember this'用法不当，'remember it'更符合英语习惯。