Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Also, be concise and directly answer the question with relevant examples.

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot. For instance, I keep a daily diary and often copy newsletters that my mother sends me.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

예시: I enjoy writing in my diary because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions and feelings clearly.

제안: Improve coherence by using linking words and correct grammar. Be more specific and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, I believe my writing will change depending on my lifestyle. For example, if I become a parent, I might write about my children, and when I get older, I may focus on my health.

제안: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to compare your preferences effectively.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better. However, typing is more convenient, especially when I do assignments.

× I copy the newsletter copyright the newsletter which my mother send me every day.

✓ I copy the newsletter which my mother sends me every day.

The verb 'send' should be in the third person singular form 'sends' to agree with the singular subject 'my mother'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I like to write my diary because it help helps me to release my stress and I can express my emotion, feelings, my writing in it.

✓ I like to write my diary because it helps me to release my stress and I can express my emotions and feelings in my writing.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings', and the phrase is better structured as 'express my emotions and feelings in my writing'.

× Depends on my lifestyle changes.

✓ It depends on my lifestyle changes.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'It' provides the necessary subject for the verb 'depends', correcting the sentence structure.

× If I get old maybe I will write about my healthy.

✓ If I get old, maybe I will write about my health.

The word 'healthy' is an adjective, but the noun 'health' is needed here to correctly express the idea. Also, a comma after 'old' improves readability.

× I like to handwriting because I can easily remember what I trying to remember.

✓ I like handwriting because I can easily remember what I am trying to remember.

'Handwriting' is a noun, so 'like to handwriting' is incorrect; it should be 'like handwriting'. Also, 'I trying' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am trying'.