Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“which also helps me help”不明确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达更清晰。

예시: No, I don't write much now because I am very busy with work. But when I was a student, I enjoyed writing articles and short stories to pass the time and improve my writing skills.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，且“helped me both my creativity and imagination”语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，表达更准确。

예시: When I was a student, I liked writing fairy tales because they helped develop my creativity and imagination. Now, I sometimes write critical articles related to my job to analyze work issues.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，且“better logical logic”表达重复且不准确。建议注意时态一致，避免重复表达，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, my writing has changed. I used to write fairy tales and fiction novels as a student, but now I prefer writing articles that are more logical and well-structured.

제안: 回答中时态不一致，且表达不够简洁自然。建议统一时态，简化句子结构，使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer typing now because it is fast and convenient with my computer. I can write anytime and anywhere. However, when I was younger, I liked handwriting my thoughts and articles.

× Actually, no, I don't write much nowadays because I have lots of work to do. However, when I was a student, I preferred to write some articles or short stories to kill time, which also helps me help.

✓ Actually, no, I don't write much nowadays because I have lots of work to do. However, when I was a student, I preferred to write some articles or short stories to kill time, which also helped me a lot.

这里的时态需要保持一致，描述过去的情况时，动词也应使用过去式。原句中'helps'是现在时，应改为过去时'helped'。

× It helped me both my creativity and imagination.

✓ It helped both my creativity and imagination.

动词help后不需要介词to或介词短语，直接加宾语即可。原句中多余的介词'me'导致语法错误。

× Absolutely yes. When I was a student, I often write fairy tale stories and fiction novels, so I prefer to write those kinds of stories.

✓ Absolutely yes. When I was a student, I often wrote fairy tale stories and fiction novels, so I preferred to write those kinds of stories.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去时。原句中'write'和'prefer'应改为过去式'wrote'和'preferred'。

× But now I prefer to write articles with better logical logic.

✓ But now I prefer to write articles with better logic.

'logical logic'是重复表达，且'logical'是形容词，'logic'是名词，搭配应为'better logic'。

× Now I prefer typing when I am writing it, it is very convenient and fast as long as I have my computer.

✓ Now I prefer typing when I am writing; it is very convenient and fast as long as I have my computer.

原句中逗号连接两个独立分句，应该用分号或句号分开。

× But when I was younger, I prefer to write down my words and articles of thoughts.

✓ But when I was younger, I preferred to write down my words and articles of thoughts.

描述过去的习惯时，动词应使用过去时，'prefer'应改为'preferred'。