Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
No, I only write when necessary like for work or school assignments. In my daily life. I rename more on digital communication methods like voice messages.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
I like to write social media posts to connect with my friends and share my life. I think the social media is a plan for me to showcase my writing style and personality.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
Yes, I think so. When I grow older, my perspectives and experiences will evolve, which will influence my writing style and topics.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
I prefer tapping. I think typing is faster and more efficient for non document and is easier to edit and make some changes.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“rename more”应为“rely more”，且句子结构不完整。建议注意语法准确性，避免断句不完整，同时使用更自然的表达方式。
예시: No, I only write when necessary, such as for work or school assignments. In my daily life, I rely more on digital communication methods like voice messages.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中“the social media is a plan”表达不准确，且句子略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节，使回答更具体。
예시: I like to write social media posts because they help me connect with my friends and share my daily life. Social media also provides a platform for me to showcase my writing style and express my personality.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时加入具体例子增强说服力。
예시: Yes, I think so. As I grow older, my perspectives and experiences will evolve, so my writing style and topics will likely change. For example, I might write more about professional subjects rather than personal stories.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中“tapping”用词不当，应使用“typing”，且“non document”表达不清晰。建议注意用词准确性，句子结构完整，并提供更具体的理由。
예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient for informal writing. It is also easier to edit and make changes compared to handwriting.
문법
× No, I only write when necessary like for work or school assignments. In my daily life.
✓ No, I only write when necessary, like for work or school assignments, in my daily life.
原句中“like for work or school assignments”和“In my daily life”分开成两个句子，导致句子结构不完整。应将其合并为一个完整句子，使用逗号连接，使句子通顺。
× I rename more on digital communication methods like voice messages.
✓ I rely more on digital communication methods like voice messages.
原句中“rename”用词错误，应为“rely”，表示依赖。此处是代词使用错误，导致句意不明。
× I think the social media is a plan for me to showcase my writing style and personality.
✓ I think social media is a platform for me to showcase my writing style and personality.
“social media”作为不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。另外，“plan”用词不当，应为“platform”，更符合语境。
× I prefer tapping.
✓ I prefer typing.
“tapping”通常指敲击动作，不符合写作方式表达，应使用“typing”表示打字。
× I think typing is faster and more efficient for non document and is easier to edit and make some changes.
✓ I think typing is faster and more efficient for non-document tasks and is easier to edit and make some changes.
“non document”缺少连字符且表达不完整，应为“non-document tasks”，表示非文档类任务。
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