Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I write quite often, but mostly informal texts like messages or emails. I don't enjoy writing literary pieces because I find them challenging, so I rarely write diaries or journals.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer writing stories because I find them more enjoyable than formal writing. Although I'm not confident with literary styles, storytelling allows me to express my creativity.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ lặp và ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe what people write changes over time because their experiences and perspectives evolve. For example, my writing style has improved as I have learned more about different topics.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh lỗi sai như "ride" thay vì "write" và "cry" thay vì "type". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể.

예시: I prefer typing because I can write faster and it's more convenient. Handwriting is slower for me, so typing helps me capture my ideas more quickly.

× I am not good at literary, so I don't enjoy writing much because of that.

✓ I am not good at literature, so I don't enjoy writing much because of that.

The word 'literary' is an adjective, but the noun 'literature' should be used here to refer to the subject or field. Using the correct noun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my because of that I rarely write in my daily life and I don't even keep write a diary or journal for example.

✓ Because of that, I rarely write in my daily life and I don't even keep a diary or journal, for example.

The original sentence has a confusing structure and redundant phrases. Starting with 'Because of that' clarifies the cause-effect relationship. Also, 'keep write' is incorrect; it should be 'keep a diary or journal'. Adding commas improves readability.

× I refer speaking or reading.

✓ I prefer speaking or reading.

The word 'refer' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express liking one activity over another. This correction fixes the verb choice to match intended meaning.

× I am not very confident in my writing skills, especially in a literature literary styles.

✓ I am not very confident in my writing skills, especially in literary styles.

The phrase 'a literature literary styles' is incorrect. 'Literary' is the correct adjective to describe 'styles', and the article 'a' is unnecessary here. Removing 'a literature' corrects the phrase.

× So I refer writing in write stories rather than writing in a formal ways.

✓ So I prefer writing stories rather than writing in formal ways.

The phrase 'refer writing in write stories' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'prefer', and 'writing stories' is the correct form. Also, 'in a formal ways' should be 'in formal ways' to match plural 'ways' without an article.

× I like writing story or something.

✓ I like writing stories or something.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the general sense of writing multiple stories. This correction aligns with standard plural usage.

× Yes, I think the contents of the content of someone, uh, will change, uh.

✓ Yes, I think the content of someone will change.

The phrase 'contents of the content' is redundant and confusing. 'Content' is uncountable here and should be singular. Removing redundancy clarifies the meaning.

× It depends on their depend on one's experience, so I think it would change.

✓ It depends on one's experience, so I think it would change.

The phrase 'depends on their depend on' is repetitive and incorrect. Using 'depends on one's experience' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× The speed when I ride by hand isn't fast, so I refer typing because it help me cry the content faster and I can catch the content better and it's also more convenient.

✓ The speed when I write by hand isn't fast, so I prefer typing because it helps me write the content faster, and I can catch the content better. It's also more convenient.

Several errors: 'ride' should be 'write'; 'refer' should be 'prefer'; 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject; 'cry' is incorrect, should be 'write'. Also, the sentence is long and benefits from being split for clarity.