Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Not really. I prefer typing to writing on paper because it's faster. Sometimes, I also use voice recording apps to capture my thoughts quickly.

제안: 回答中表达了喜好和原因，但句子结构不够清晰，时态使用不当。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I really enjoy writing journals because it helps me record my experiences and feelings. Also, I like to look back at my past entries to see how I've changed over time.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，注意词汇拼写和句子结构，避免句子残缺。

예시: Yes, as I get older, my experiences and knowledge influence my writing. I tend to write more about my inner thoughts and feelings now.

제안: 回答表达了偏好和理由，但用词和句子结构可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达和连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: I prefer typing because it's more convenient for my work. Also, I can carry my phone anywhere, which makes it easy to write on the go.

× I prefer typing instead of write something on paper I think.

✓ I prefer typing instead of writing something on paper, I think.

在介词短语中，动词应使用动名词形式，因此应使用 'writing' 而不是 'write'。

× I prefer typing instead of write something on paper I think.

✓ I prefer typing instead of writing something on paper, I think.

'instead of' 后面应接动名词或名词短语，不能直接接动词原形。

× I prefer to use some voice devices to record my thinking instead of consuming time by writing.

✓ I prefer to use some voice devices to record my thinking instead of spending time writing.

'consume time by writing' 表达不自然，通常用 'spend time doing something'，且 'instead of' 后应接动名词形式。

× I do really like writing journals and it is helpful for me to write down my experiences and feelings.

✓ I really like writing journals and it is helpful for me to write down my experiences and feelings.

'do really like' 语法上虽不错误，但多余且不自然，去掉 'do' 更符合习惯用法。

× I really like to see what I had read before and comparing the differences.

✓ I really like to see what I have read before and compare the differences.

此处应使用现在完成时 'have read' 表示过去到现在的经历，且 'comparing' 应改为动词原形 'compare' 以保持句子结构一致。

× Hmm yes actually with my age increasing, I think my experience and acknowledge would affect my writing and I would like to write more about deep inside instead of.

✓ Hmm yes, actually, as I get older, I think my experience and knowledge would affect my writing and I would like to write more about my inner thoughts.

'acknowledge' 是动词，正确名词应为 'knowledge'；'with my age increasing' 表达不自然，改为 'as I get older'；'deep inside' 需具体化为 'my inner thoughts'。

× Actually, I prefer typing. It is more convenient to type the thing during my job and I can take the phone wherever I want, so it is portable.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing. It is more convenient to type things during my job and I can take my phone wherever I want, so it is portable.

'the thing' 应改为复数 'things'，更符合语境；'the phone' 应改为 'my phone'，表示特指自己的手机。