Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Diaries”应为“diaries”，“take touch”应为“keep in touch”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复“sometimes I write”。

예시: Yes, I write quite often. Usually, I keep a diary to record my daily experiences, and I also send messages to my friends to stay in touch and maintain our friendships.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“keep memorize”应为“remember”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子表达原因。

예시: I enjoy writing diaries the most because it helps me remember important moments. When I read the diaries I wrote as a child, I find them very interesting and nostalgic.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更流畅。

예시: In the short term, I don't think what I write will change much because my life remains stable. However, in the long term, things will change. For example, when I study abroad, I will write essays that are different from my usual diary entries.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: When I was a child, I liked writing with pens. However, in recent years, I have started using smartphone apps to record my life, often using voice input for convenience.

× Yes, I write a lot and normally I write Diaries most of the time and sometimes I wrote a message to my friends and take touch with them and maintain our friendship.

✓ Yes, I write a lot and normally I write diaries most of the time and sometimes I write messages to my friends and keep in touch with them to maintain our friendship.

“Diaries”和“message”应使用复数形式，因为表示多次写日记和多条信息；“take touch”应改为“keep in touch”，这是固定搭配。

× Yes, I write a lot and normally I write Diaries most of the time and sometimes I wrote a message to my friends and take touch with them and maintain our friendship.

✓ Yes, I write a lot and normally I write diaries most of the time and sometimes I write messages to my friends and keep in touch with them to maintain our friendship.

句中“wrote”与前后时态不一致，应使用一般现在时“write”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× I like writing Diaries the most because it helps me keep memorize and when I read the diary I wrote when I was a child, that's very interesting and writing helps me.

✓ I like writing diaries the most because it helps me remember, and when I read the diary I wrote when I was a child, it's very interesting and writing helps me.

“keep memorize”搭配错误，应改为“remember”；“that's”应改为“it's”更符合表达习惯。

× I like writing Diaries the most because it helps me keep memorize and when I read the diary I wrote when I was a child, that's very interesting and writing helps me.

✓ I like writing diaries the most because it helps me remember, and when I read the diary I wrote when I was a child, it's very interesting and writing helps me.

“Diaries”应小写且复数形式正确；“diary”指单个日记本，使用正确。

× Well, in short term I think we've not changed because my life won't be have my big change, but in long term that will be changing.

✓ Well, in the short term I think we haven't changed much because my life won't have big changes, but in the long term that will change.

“won't be have”结构错误，应改为“won't have”；“will be changing”改为“will change”更简洁准确。

× Well, in short term I think we've not changed because my life won't be have my big change, but in long term that will be changing.

✓ Well, in the short term I think we haven't changed much because my life won't have big changes, but in the long term that will change.

“in short term”应加定冠词“the”，同理“in long term”也应加“the”。

× Well, in short term I think we've not changed because my life won't be have my big change, but in long term that will be changing.

✓ Well, in the short term I think we haven't changed much because my life won't have big changes, but in the long term that will change.

“big change”应使用复数“big changes”，因为表示多次或大的变化。

× I will study abroad and write some essays that's different from what I write.

✓ I will study abroad and write some essays that are different from what I write now.

“that's”应改为“that are”，因为“essays”是复数；“different from what I write”后加“now”更清晰。

× Well, when I was a child I like writing with pens and a couple years before I start to use my smartphone apps to record my life and use sound input.

✓ Well, when I was a child I liked writing with pens, and a couple of years ago I started to use my smartphone apps to record my life and use voice input.

“like”应改为过去式“liked”，与“was”时态一致；“a couple years before”应改为“a couple of years ago”；“start”应改为过去式“started”；“sound input”应为“voice input”。