Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
No, I do not write very often because I find it quite time consuming and demanding. Instead, I usually prefer quicker communication methods like voice notes or text messages, which are more convenient for me. For instance, I only write when it's necessary, such as when I'm organizing my work schedule or making important plans.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
I like to write mostly when I'm planning for my day or important tasks at work. Writing helps me organise my schedule clearly so I can be more efficient and avoid forgetting anything. I often make to do lists to keep track of my responsibilities and manage my time perfectly.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
I do not think the things are right will change because I have a rigid work schedule so I constantly write the same things over and over.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is much more convenient and faster for me. I even took a typing course in high school, which helped me develop good speed and accuracy. Additionally, typing allows me to easily edit and organize my work, which is especially useful when writing long text.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答表达清晰且自然，但可以通过使用更多连接词来增强连贯性，例如在举例时使用“for example”或“such as”。此外，避免重复表达“write”这个词，可以用“compose”或“jot down”等同义词替换。
예시: No, I don't write very often because I find it quite time-consuming and demanding. Instead, I usually prefer quicker communication methods, such as voice notes or text messages, which are more convenient for me. For example, I only compose written notes when it's necessary, like organizing my work schedule or making important plans.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 90.0제안: 你的回答结构合理且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词如“therefore”或“so that”来使句子更流畅。同时，尝试使用更丰富的词汇替换“write”和“make”，例如“draft”或“create”。
예시: I like to write mostly when I'm planning my day or important tasks at work. Writing helps me organise my schedule clearly so that I can be more efficient and avoid forgetting anything. Therefore, I often create to-do lists to keep track of my responsibilities and manage my time effectively.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“the things are right”应为“the things I write”。建议注意句子结构的准确性，并尝试使用连接词如“because”或“since”来解释原因，使表达更自然。
예시: I do not think the things I write will change because I have a rigid work schedule, so I constantly write the same tasks repeatedly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 92.0제안: 你的回答内容丰富且表达流畅。为了更自然，可以将“rather than”替换为“to”，并在句子间使用更多连接词如“also”或“moreover”来增强连贯性。
예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much more convenient and faster for me. I also took a typing course in high school, which helped me develop good speed and accuracy. Moreover, typing allows me to easily edit and organize my work, which is especially useful when writing long texts.
문법
× I often make to do lists to keep track of my responsibilities and manage my time perfectly.
✓ I often make to-do lists to keep track of my responsibilities and manage my time perfectly.
The phrase 'to do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists' because it is a compound adjective describing the noun 'lists'. This is a common convention in English to clarify meaning and improve readability.
× I do not think the things are right will change because I have a rigid work schedule so I constantly write the same things over and over.
✓ I do not think the things I write will change because I have a rigid work schedule, so I constantly write the same things over and over.
The original sentence has a misplaced phrase 'are right' which disrupts the sentence structure. It should be 'the things I write' to correctly convey the intended meaning. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the two independent clauses.
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