Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then briefly explaining why. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases.

예시: I don't write very often, maybe once in a while. I prefer reading novels because writing can be mentally tiring and affect my other activities.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward expressions. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

예시: I am not very interested in writing, but sometimes I write articles I find online. I try to explain them clearly to help myself learn better.

제안: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, I think what I write may change over time because other authors update information, which helps me and others gain better knowledge.

제안: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unnecessary phrases.

예시: I prefer typing because devices like laptops and mobiles can automatically correct my mistakes, helping me write accurately and quickly.

× I do not prefer write a lot it it creates a some type of difficulty to my mind and my further activities.

✓ I do not prefer writing a lot as it creates some type of difficulty for my mind and my further activities.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'writing' instead of the base form 'write'. Also, 'a some type' is incorrect; 'some type' is sufficient. Additionally, 'to my mind' should be 'for my mind' to indicate the effect on the mind.

× I do not prefer write a lot it it creates a some type of difficulty to my mind and my further activities.

✓ I do not prefer writing a lot as it creates some type of difficulty for my mind and my further activities.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'difficulty'; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate the effect on something.

× I do not prefer write a lot it it creates a some type of difficulty to my mind and my further activities.

✓ I do not prefer writing a lot as it creates some type of difficulty for my mind and my further activities.

The phrase 'it it' is a repetition error; only one 'it' is needed to maintain clarity and correctness.

× To be honest I have not interest in writing, but if I started to write I am a sharp cookie.

✓ To be honest, I have no interest in writing, but if I start to write, I am a sharp cookie.

The phrase 'have not interest' is incorrect; it should be 'have no interest'. Also, 'if I started to write' should be 'if I start to write' to match the conditional present tense. Commas are added for clarity.

× I used to write some type of articles from browsing from Internet and write in a very explained and easy way for my further learning.

✓ I used to write some types of articles by browsing the Internet and write in a very clear and easy way for my further learning.

The phrase 'some type of articles' should be pluralized to 'some types of articles'. 'Browsing from Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'browsing the Internet'. 'Very explained' is incorrect; 'very clear' is appropriate here.

× Yes, definitely. I usually write the things and some other topics copied from other websites and there is a compulsory that they would change in the future by the other authors and which gives a better knowledge for me and for others.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually write things and some other topics copied from other websites, and it is compulsory that they will change in the future by other authors, which gives better knowledge to me and others.

The phrase 'there is a compulsory' is incorrect; 'it is compulsory' is correct. Also, 'would change' is better as 'will change' to indicate future certainty. 'Gives a better knowledge for me' should be 'gives better knowledge to me'.

× Yes, definitely. I usually write the things and some other topics copied from other websites and there is a compulsory that they would change in the future by the other authors and which gives a better knowledge for me and for others.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually write things and some other topics copied from other websites, and it is compulsory that they will change in the future by other authors, which gives better knowledge to me and others.

The preposition 'for' in 'gives a better knowledge for me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating the recipient of knowledge.

× To be honest, I usually prefer typing because whenever you type on some type of technological advancements like on laptops and mobile it, it gives you some type of mistake that you write and it corrects your mistake easily and immediately at present time and which helps to write in a very correct manner.

✓ To be honest, I usually prefer typing because whenever you type on technological devices like laptops and mobiles, it shows some mistakes you make and corrects them easily and immediately, which helps you write in a very correct manner.

The phrase 'some type of technological advancements like on laptops and mobile it' is awkward and incorrect; 'technological devices like laptops and mobiles' is clearer. Also, 'some type of mistake that you write' is incorrect; it should be 'some mistakes you make'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.