Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, which is good. However, it could be improved by adding more specific details and using more natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'I write a diary for my daily life,' you could say 'I write in my diary every day to record my daily experiences and thoughts.' This would make your answer more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I write in my diary every day to record my daily experiences and thoughts. It helps me reflect on my day and improve my writing skills.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. To improve, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you could say, 'I like to write stories about my life, especially about how I practice and improve my skills in football and pickleball, because it helps me track my progress and stay motivated.'

예시: I like to write stories about my life, especially about how I practice and improve my skills in football and pickleball, because it helps me track my progress and stay motivated.

제안: Your answer shows an attempt to explain your idea but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. To improve, try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words. For example, you could say, 'Yes, I often reread what I have written, and sometimes I update or change my writing to include new ideas or correct mistakes.'

예시: Yes, I often reread what I have written, and sometimes I update or change my writing to include new ideas or correct mistakes.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. To improve, try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words. For example, you could say, 'I prefer typing when I write formal texts because it is faster and easier to edit. However, I like handwriting when I write in my diary because it feels more personal.'

예시: I prefer typing when I write formal texts because it is faster and easier to edit. However, I like handwriting when I write in my diary because it feels more personal.

× Either way, write a story about my life, like how how I can practice my skill in football and in pickleball.

✓ Either way, I write a story about my life, like how I can practice my skills in football and pickleball.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'I' before the verb 'write', which is necessary for correct sentence structure (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8). Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context of multiple activities. The verb 'write' should be in the present simple form with the subject 'I'.

× I think in at other time I read again what I write, so I think I can change the new thing when I write in the future.

✓ I think at another time I will read again what I have written, so I think I can change new things when I write in the future.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies. 'Read' should be in future tense 'will read' to match 'at another time' (future). 'What I write' should be 'what I have written' to indicate completed action before reading. Also, 'new thing' should be plural 'new things' to be more natural. The phrase 'in at other time' is incorrect and corrected to 'at another time' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5).

× In my mind I prefer typing in a character when I writing and do my writing IL and also I like to handwriting to write diary.

✓ In my mind, I prefer typing characters when I am writing and doing my writing, and also I like handwriting to write my diary.

The phrase 'when I writing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. 'Typing in a character' is awkward; 'typing characters' is more natural. 'Do my writing IL' is unclear; assuming 'doing my writing' is intended. 'Like to handwriting' should be 'like handwriting' as 'handwriting' is a noun here. Also, 'write diary' should be 'write my diary' to include the possessive pronoun (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8).