Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
Yes, of course. Actually my major is Chinese literature, so I need to write a lot for my study and I usually write in my free time because actually I'm a writer online.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
Personally, I prefer to write novels and diary. For example, I can write everything that I want to write and I want to write novels because I'm a writer online and I need to write.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
Absolutely, yes. For example, now I like to write novels and Diaries, but you know, really a hectic life, so maybe I don't have much time to write my diary in the future I need to.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
Personally, I prefer to write something on my hand because I think it is sensible and meaningful to my. Book.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时应避免重复使用“actually”，并且句子结构可以更简洁自然。可以直接说明写作的频率和原因，避免冗长。
예시: Yes, I write quite a lot because my major is Chinese literature, which requires a lot of writing. Besides, I also write online in my free time as a hobby.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中表达不够连贯，且重复“write”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明喜欢写小说和日记的原因。
예시: I enjoy writing novels and keeping a diary because they allow me to express my thoughts freely. As an online writer, novels help me engage readers with stories.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并用连接词表达因果关系。
예시: Yes, I believe my writing will change. Currently, I enjoy writing novels and diaries, but due to a busy life, I might have less time for diaries in the future.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答不清楚且有语法错误。应明确表达偏好，并解释原因，避免模糊和错误的表达。
예시: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me connect better with my thoughts when writing.
문법
× Personally, I prefer to write novels and diary.
✓ Personally, I prefer to write novels and diaries.
这里'diary'应该用复数形式'diaries'，因为前面提到了'novels'是复数，且表示多种写作内容时，应该保持一致使用复数形式。
× For example, now I like to write novels and Diaries, but you know, really a hectic life, so maybe I don't have much time to write my diary in the future I need to.
✓ For example, now I like to write novels and diaries, but you know, life is really hectic, so maybe I won't have much time to write my diary in the future.
'Diaries'应为小写，且前后时态和表达需要调整，'life is really hectic'更符合表达习惯，'maybe I don't have much time'应改为将来时态'maybe I won't have much time'，以符合未来时间表达。
× Personally, I prefer to write something on my hand because I think it is sensible and meaningful to my. Book.
✓ Personally, I prefer to write something by hand because I think it is sensible and meaningful to my book.
短语'write on my hand'错误，正确表达是'write by hand'表示用手写；另外，句末的'my. Book'应为'my book'，去掉多余的句号。
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