Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
Yes, I do write a lot. I think it is a good way to create new stories and communicate with others. Recently I've been to fan fictions. Sometimes I feel that my favorite characters don't get the ending they deserve, so I want to create a better life and a different ending for them.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
Well, I like to write something fictions based on the game I'm really into. The game's background and setting are already intriguing, but I want to create some more unique experiences based on my imagination. For example, the game is set in the scientific world and I could create.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
Well, it depends on what I write. For the fan fictions I create, I think they won't change because they are on the basis of the fixed game background and setting. But for something I create as my personal experience and feelings, they might change over time because you know, a person's feelings isn't always the same.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
Well, I prefer typing because it's faster and it allows me to write more in the same amount of time. But of course handwriting has its own benefits. For example, it is more meaningful with the physical act of the pens. I mean just think of the process of pens moving across the paper and it lets the.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答内容丰富，但表达略显不够自然，部分句子结构不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意时态和词汇的准确使用。
예시: Yes, I write a lot because it helps me create new stories and connect with others. Recently, I've been writing fan fiction because I want to give my favorite characters better endings than in the original stories.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思，影响了表达的连贯性。建议回答时注意完整表达观点，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。
예시: I like to write fiction based on a game I enjoy. The game's scientific setting is fascinating, and I like to imagine unique stories within that world to make it more interesting.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较好，但口语中使用了口头语“you know”，建议减少口头语的使用，使表达更正式自然。
예시: It depends on the type of writing. Fan fiction usually stays the same because it follows the game's fixed background. However, personal writings may change over time as feelings and experiences evolve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答未完成，最后一句话中断，导致表达不完整。建议回答时注意完整表达观点，避免中断，同时使用连接词使内容连贯。
예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and helps me write more. However, handwriting has its own advantages, such as the meaningful feeling of moving a pen across paper, which can enhance creativity.
문법
× Recently I've been to fan fictions.
✓ Recently I've been reading fan fictions.
这里的've been to'通常表示去过某个地方，但“fan fictions”是指“同人小说”，不是地点，应该用“been reading”表示最近一直在阅读。建议区分动词短语的正确用法。
× Well, I like to write something fictions based on the game I'm really into.
✓ Well, I like to write some fictions based on the game I'm really into.
“something fictions”搭配不正确，应该用“some fictions”表示一些小说。建议学习不可数名词和可数名词的量词搭配。
× a person's feelings isn't always the same.
✓ a person's feelings aren't always the same.
“feelings”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“aren't”，保持主谓一致。建议注意主谓一致规则。
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