Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意句子结构，避免断句不完整，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I don't write very often these days because I usually send texts on my phone. For example, when I'm taking a bus and something comes up, I can quickly type a message.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达喜欢写什么和原因。

예시: I like to write down sentences from books because they often inspire me and help me remember important ideas.

제안: 句子结构重复且有语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I think the sentences I write change because my perspectives change over time, which is quite normal.

제안: 表达较为自然，但“temperature”用词不当，建议使用更准确的词汇来表达情感或感觉。

예시: If I have time, I prefer handwriting because it preserves the personal touch and emotion behind the words, especially with traditional Chinese characters.

× Like taking a bus.

✓ Like taking buses.

这里的“bus”应使用复数形式，因为表达的是一般情况或习惯，表示乘坐公交车这一行为的普遍性。

× Something just come up, I can talk really fast and immediately.

✓ Something just comes up, I can talk really fast and immediately.

动词“come”应使用第三人称单数形式“comes”，因为主语是单数的“something”。

× I usually like to write down the sentence of the books because when I read the books I always like to note some things I really in touched and keeps it on my mind.

✓ I usually like to write down sentences from books because when I read books I always like to note some things I am really touched by and keep them in my mind.

“sentence”应为复数“sentences”，因为通常写下多句；“books”前不需要定冠词“the”，表示泛指；“keeps”应改为“keep”，与主语“things”保持一致；“in touched”应为“am really touched by”，表达被感动的状态。

× I really in touched and keeps it on my mind.

✓ I am really touched and keep it in my mind.

缺少动词“am”，且“keeps”应改为“keep”，与主语保持一致。

× I think I write down the sentence based on the different perspectives and I think the perspectives change all the time and it is normal to change, so I think it is happens.

✓ I think I write down sentences based on different perspectives and I think the perspectives change all the time and it is normal to change, so I think it happens.

“sentence”应为复数“sentences”；“it is happens”中“is”多余，应去掉，保持时态一致。

× If I had the time, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can keep the temperature you feel about the words, especially the traditional Chinese word.

✓ If I had the time, I would prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can keep the temperature you feel about the words, especially traditional Chinese characters.

条件句中虚拟语气应使用“would prefer”；“word”应为复数“characters”，表示汉字；“the traditional Chinese word”中“the”不必要且“word”用词不当。