Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态的正确使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明。

예시: I don't write much nowadays because I have finished my final exams. However, last month I wrote many papers for my classes, including previews and reviews.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题，建议先明确回答喜欢写什么，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I like writing scripts because it is part of my communication major. I enjoy creating stories and developing them on my own.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，逻辑上更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually edit my writing before publishing. I change some words and check facts carefully to make sure everything is correct.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议先直接表达偏好，再用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think better and be more creative. Typing feels less personal to me.

× Nowadays I don't write it too much because I was already finished my final examination and it's quite relaxing for me.

✓ Nowadays I don't write it too much because I have already finished my final examination and it's quite relaxing for me.

这里使用了过去时态 'was already finished'，但应使用现在完成时 'have already finished'，因为动作发生在过去并对现在有影响。

× But last month I don't.

✓ But last month I didn't.

这里描述过去的动作，应该使用过去时态，'don't' 应改为 'didn't'。

× I cannot even count how many papers I have write all about the preview and review.

✓ I cannot even count how many papers I have written all about the preview and review.

这里 'have write' 应为现在完成时的过去分词形式 'have written'。

× In regard to my major in in the college, I must like enjoy the time when I write about script writing 'cause it's one of my major course called communication and I do like the processing that when I created story and pure made it by my own.

✓ In regard to my major in college, I really enjoy the time when I write about script writing because it's one of my major courses called communication and I like the process of creating stories and purely making them on my own.

'in in the college' 重复且介词使用错误，应为 'in college'；'must like enjoy' 语法错误，应简化为 'really enjoy'；'major course' 应为复数 'major courses'；'processing' 应为 'process'；'created story and pure made it by my own' 结构混乱，应改为 'creating stories and purely making them on my own'。

× Yes, of course, because I need to editing before I really send to the publication.

✓ Yes, of course, because I need to edit before I really send it to the publication.

'need to editing' 中 'need to' 后应接动词原形 'edit'，而非动名词 'editing'。

× So we have to change about the function and some words may be transposed to another letters and also the the fact checking something I, I, I suppose it would be happen like this, but actually it's not.

✓ So we have to change the function and some words may be transposed to other letters, and also fact-checking is important because I suppose it would happen like this, but actually it doesn't.

'change about the function' 中 'about' 不必要，应去掉；'another letters' 应为复数 'other letters'；'fact checking something' 结构不清，应改为 'fact-checking is important'；'would be happen' 语法错误，应为 'would happen'。

× I think most people like typing but for me I like handwriting cause handwriting is more it's like a way that I can motivate all my rings working and I like this way typing is just lack of something that when I creating something.

✓ I think most people like typing, but for me I like handwriting because handwriting is more like a way that can motivate all my fingers working, and I like this way. Typing just lacks something when I am creating something.

'cause' 应改为正式的 'because'；'rings' 应为 'fingers'；'like a way that I can motivate all my rings working' 结构不通顺，应改为 'like a way that can motivate all my fingers working'；'typing is just lack of something' 应为 'typing just lacks something'；'when I creating' 应为 'when I am creating'。