Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“a post graduate student”应为“a postgraduate student”，“academic paper”应为复数形式“academic papers”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达“write a lot”。

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am a postgraduate student. I often have to complete academic papers and assignments for my courses.

제안: 回答中时态不一致，应注意时态的正确使用，如“like”应为过去式“liked”。另外，表达可以更自然流畅，避免重复“drama”。

예시: I enjoy writing sketches for dramas because when I was young, I liked being an editor and director, rehearsing plays and organizing big shows.

제안: 注意语法错误，“has”应改为“have”，“grown elder”表达不自然，建议用“gotten older”或“grown older”。回答内容具体且有逻辑，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, the things I write have definitely changed as I have grown older. For instance, my writing style has become more mature and sophisticated because I now pay more attention to details and structure.

제안: 语法错误，“I'm prefer”应为“I prefer”。回答中句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词如“because”后分句更清晰。

예시: I prefer typing because it is more convenient. I can see my work online, type faster than handwriting, and easily make edits.

× I have to write a lot of academic paper and I also have some parts I have to finish the assignment.

✓ I have to write a lot of academic papers and I also have some parts I have to finish for the assignment.

“academic paper”应为复数形式“academic papers”，因为表示很多篇论文。

× I also have some parts I have to finish the assignment.

✓ I also have some parts I have to finish for the assignment.

“finish the assignment”前应加介词“for”，表示完成作业的某些部分。

× When I was very young, I like to be a editor and director to rehearse all the drama and present a big show.

✓ When I was very young, I liked to be an editor and director to rehearse all the drama and present a big show.

描述过去的喜好，应使用过去时“liked”。

× I like to be a editor and director to rehearse all the drama and present a big show.

✓ I like to be an editor and director to rehearse all the drama and present a big show.

“editor”以元音音素开头，前面应使用不定冠词“an”。

× I like to be a editor and director to rehearse all the drama and present a big show.

✓ I like to be an editor and director to rehearse all the dramas and present a big show.

“drama”应为复数“dramas”，表示多部戏剧。

× I think the things I write has definitely changed as I have grown elder.

✓ I think the things I write have definitely changed as I have grown older.

主语“things”是复数，谓语动词应为“have”。

× I think the things I write has definitely changed as I have grown elder.

✓ I think the things I write have definitely changed as I have grown older.

“elder”通常用于比较亲属关系，描述年龄应使用“older”。

× I find my writing style has become more mature and sophisticated because I pay more attention to detail and structure.

✓ I find my writing style has become more mature and sophisticated because I pay more attention to details and structure.

“detail”应为复数“details”，表示多个细节。

× Actually, I'm prefer typing because it's more convenient, I can see it online and type it more quickly than handwriting, and it's easily edited.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because it's more convenient; I can see it online and type it more quickly than handwriting, and it's easily edited.

“I'm prefer”错误，应为“I prefer”。

× Actually, I'm prefer typing because it's more convenient, I can see it online and type it more quickly than handwriting, and it's easily edited.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because it's more convenient; I can see it online and type it more quickly than handwriting, and it's easily edited.

两个独立分句之间应使用分号或句号，不能用逗号连接。