Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하게 들리도록 문장을 간결하게 구성하고, 문법적 오류를 줄이세요. 예를 들어, 'my dream was writer' 대신 'my dream was to be a writer'라고 표현하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 답변이 다소 중복되므로 불필요한 부분을 줄이고 핵심을 명확히 하세요.

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I have always dreamed of becoming a writer since I was nine years old. Also, I often write for my school projects.

제안: 답변에서 문법과 어휘 사용을 개선하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'some fictions or novel' 대신 'fiction or novels'라고 표현하고, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다.

예시: I like writing fiction and novels because I have many creative ideas for stories. Also, I enjoy dramas and movies, which inspire me to write.

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽고 구체적으로 만들어서 자신의 생각을 분명히 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'if I enter some company then I have to work not writing a novel' 대신 'If I start working at a company, I might not have time to write novels'라고 표현할 수 있습니다.

예시: Yes, I think my writing will change because if I start working at a company, I might not have enough time to write novels.

제안: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문법과 표현을 더 자연스럽게 다듬으세요. 예를 들어, 'I don't have a really good at writing by hand' 대신 'I'm not very good at handwriting'이라고 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster than handwriting, and I'm not very good at writing by hand.

× Yes, I write a lot because when I was nine years old my dream was writer and nowadays I had to do some projects from my school.

✓ Yes, I write a lot because when I was nine years old my dream was to be a writer and nowadays I have to do some projects for my school.

'My dream was writer' is incorrect because 'writer' is a noun and needs a verb phrase to connect properly. The correct form is 'my dream was to be a writer'. Also, 'I had to do some projects from my school' should be 'I have to do some projects for my school' to indicate current obligation and correct preposition usage.

× Yes, I think it is because if I enter some company then I have to work not writing a novel.

✓ Yes, I think so because if I enter a company, then I will have to work and not write a novel.

The sentence lacks proper modal verb and future tense usage. 'I think it is' should be 'I think so'. 'If I enter some company' should be 'if I enter a company' (article correction). 'I have to work not writing a novel' is incorrect; it should be 'I will have to work and not write a novel' to express future obligation and correct verb form.

× I like writing some fictions or novel because I have so many ideas about the story and I like drama or movies, so I wanted to be a writer.

✓ I like writing fiction or novels because I have so many ideas about stories and I like drama and movies, so I want to be a writer.

'Some fictions or novel' is incorrect; 'fiction' is uncountable and 'novel' should be plural 'novels' to match the context. 'About the story' should be 'about stories' for general meaning. 'Drama or movies' should be 'drama and movies' to indicate both. 'I wanted to be a writer' should be 'I want to be a writer' to match present tense desire.

× I prefer typing because typing is faster than writing by my hand, and I don't have a really good at writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is faster than writing by hand, and I'm not really good at writing by hand.

'Writing by my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'writing by hand'. 'I don't have a really good at writing by hand' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I'm not really good at writing by hand' to correctly express ability.