Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you write a lot?
수험생
Yes I do. Writing gives me the energy and focus I need to stay productive. It lifts my spirits and puts me in a green mood, helping me feel more motivated and positive afterwards.
시험관
What do you like to write? Why?
수험생
I write to write down my daily life and my feelings. Whenever I do that, it fills me with excitement and positivity. It drives me to tackle tasks better and makes everything more enjoyable. I always feel more capable and ready to face anything.
시험관
Do you think the things you write would change?
수험생
Yes, I think the things I write would change because everything is changing every moment.
시험관
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
수험생
To be honest, I don't have strong feelings about typing or handwriting. I'm fine with using them, but they're not my first choice. It depends on the situation, so I go with whatever works best.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较自然且内容积极，但“puts me in a green mood”表达不够地道，且缺少连接词使句子间衔接稍显生硬。建议使用更常见的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。
예시: Yes, I do. Writing helps me stay focused and productive because it lifts my spirits. Moreover, it makes me feel motivated and positive afterwards.
What do you like to write? Why?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但缺少连接词使句子间衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性。
예시: I like to write about my daily life and feelings because it fills me with excitement and positivity. As a result, I feel more capable and ready to face any challenges.
Do you think the things you write would change?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答简洁明了，但可以进一步丰富内容，增加具体原因或例子，并使用连接词使表达更自然。
예시: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time because my thoughts and experiences evolve constantly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答表达了观点，但部分句子较为重复且缺少具体细节。建议减少重复，增加具体情境说明，并使用连接词提升连贯性。
예시: I don't have a strong preference between typing and handwriting because it depends on the situation. For example, I type when I need to write quickly, but I handwrite when I want to focus more.
문법
× Do you think the things you write would change?
✓ Do you think the things you write will change?
这里使用“would”不符合语境，因为是在询问对未来的看法，应该用表示将来可能性的“will”。“Would”通常用于假设或条件句。建议用“will”表达未来的可能性。
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