Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy reading articles and books. Writing helps me relax and express my thoughts clearly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I enjoy writing articles because they allow me to express my ideas and thoughts clearly. Moreover, writing helps me to relax and organise my thinking.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and improve sentence clarity for a more natural response.

예시: Yes, I believe my writing changes over time as I gain more experience and knowledge. For instance, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to explain my thoughts more clearly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains pronunciation and grammatical errors. Make sure to directly answer the question, use correct vocabulary, and provide reasons with linking words to make your response coherent.

예시: I prefer typing because it is more comfortable and convenient for me. Handwriting can be tiring and slower, so I usually choose to type my work.

× Yes, I write a lot because I like to read the article or books or literature.

✓ Yes, I write a lot because I like to read articles, books, or literature.

The phrase 'the article or books or literature' incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms and uses 'the' unnecessarily. 'Articles' should be plural to match 'books' and 'literature', and the definite article 'the' is not needed here because the speaker refers to articles in general.

× So I like to write to article.

✓ So I like to write articles.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'article'. The correct form is to say 'write articles' without 'to'. Also, 'article' should be plural to match the general meaning.

× I like to write because writing article allowed me to express my ideas and my thinking, so I think I threw the right It can let me feel relaxed.

✓ I like to write because writing articles allows me to express my ideas and my thinking, so I think it can make me feel relaxed.

'Writing article' should be 'writing articles' to indicate general writing. 'Allowed' should be 'allows' to match present tense. 'I threw the right' is unclear and likely a misstatement; replaced with 'I think it can make me feel relaxed' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I believe the things I write would change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge my writing style and ideas tend to involve.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time as I gain more experience and knowledge; my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

'Would change' should be 'will change' to express future certainty. 'Tend to involve' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'evolve' to indicate gradual change. Also, a semicolon is added for clarity between two independent clauses.

× For example, when I was younger my writing was simple, but now I try to explain my thoughts more clear.

✓ For example, when I was younger, my writing was simple, but now I try to explain my thoughts more clearly.

'More clear' is incorrect; the adverb form 'more clearly' should be used to modify the verb 'explain'. A comma is added after 'younger' for correct sentence structure.

× I like Taiping because I think if I type the article it is a comfortable and convenient to me, but if I do use the handwriting it will uncomfortable and you too.

✓ I like typing because I think if I type the article it is comfortable and convenient for me, but if I use handwriting it is uncomfortable for me and you too.

'Taiping' is a mispronunciation of 'typing'. 'It is a comfortable and convenient to me' should be 'it is comfortable and convenient for me' to use correct prepositions and remove unnecessary articles. 'If I do use the handwriting' is awkward; 'if I use handwriting' is correct. 'It will uncomfortable and you too' is incorrect; it should be 'it is uncomfortable for me and you too'.