Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, "Mathematics Council" không rõ nghĩa trong ngữ cảnh này và nên thay bằng "mathematical formulas" hoặc "mathematics concepts". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I write a lot because handwriting helps me memorize important information, such as mathematical formulas and literature concepts.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "summary summaries" là thừa và "hip hops" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh tiếng ừ, à trong câu nói.

예시: I like to write summaries because I have a lot of knowledge and problems to solve. Writing summaries helps me learn in a deliberate and systematic way.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp như "mad families of the knowledge". Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh những cụm từ không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: Yes, I believe that what I write can influence the future. For example, knowledge and experiences change over time, so the information I write now might be updated or improved later.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen hiện tại và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "help me to manage" không rõ nghĩa. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích viết tay hơn gõ phím.

예시: I prefer handwriting when I study because it helps me memorize difficult information more effectively and quickly. Also, writing by hand helps me organize my thoughts better.

× I write a lot because I think that handwriting is incredibly important to help me memorize some important information, such as the Mathematics Council or the literature knowledge.

✓ I write a lot because I think that handwriting is incredibly important to help me memorize some important information, such as mathematics concepts or literature knowledge.

The phrase 'the Mathematics Council' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'mathematics concepts' or similar. Also, 'the literature knowledge' is incorrect; 'literature knowledge' without 'the' is better. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and articles.

× I would like to write some summary summaries on the paper because because I have a lot of knowledge and hip hops, uh, problems to solve.

✓ I would like to write some summaries on paper because I have a lot of knowledge and problems to solve.

The phrase 'summary summaries' is redundant; 'summaries' alone is sufficient. Also, 'hip hops' seems to be an error or mispronunciation and is removed for clarity. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general expression. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and phrasing.

× So when I write the summaries I can uh, learn everything deliberately and systematic.

✓ So when I write the summaries, I can learn everything deliberately and systematically.

The adverb 'systematic' is incorrectly used; it should be the adverb form 'systematically' to modify the verb 'learn'. Also, a comma is needed after 'summaries' for clarity. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× we can see that about the mad families of the knowledge at present.

✓ we can see that about the main families of knowledge at present.

The phrase 'mad families' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'main families' is more appropriate. Also, 'the knowledge' should be 'knowledge' without 'the' in this context. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and vocabulary.

× At present there are the certain experience, but in the future it can change a lot.

✓ At present there is certain experience, but in the future it can change a lot.

The phrase 'there are the certain experience' is incorrect because 'experience' is uncountable and singular here, so 'there is certain experience' is correct. Also, 'the' is unnecessary before 'certain experience'. This is a 'there be' issue and article error.

× Well, when I was learning, I often prefer handwriting most because I do believe that when I use my handwriting and jot down on paper, I will memorize the knowledge and difficult information more effectively and quickly.

✓ Well, when I was learning, I often preferred handwriting most because I believe that when I use my handwriting and jot down on paper, I memorize knowledge and difficult information more effectively and quickly.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'when I was learning'. Also, 'do believe' is unnecessary and can be simplified to 'believe'. 'Will memorize' should be 'memorize' to express habitual action. This is a past tense issue and present tense issue.

× In addition, help me to manage.

✓ In addition, it helps me to manage.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'it helps me to manage' corrects the sentence structure. This is a sentence structure error.