Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了写作的必要性，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot because as a college student, I have to complete exams and essays regularly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且有重复词汇。建议使用更准确的词汇表达原因，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: I like to write notes and keep a diary because it helps me organize my thoughts and reflect on my daily experiences.

제안: 时态使用不准确，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，并更明确地表达写作内容的变化。

예시: Yes, my writing habits have changed. When I was younger, I wrote every day, but now I prefer writing notes or even novels occasionally.

제안: 表达较为清晰，但有重复和小错误。建议避免重复词汇，使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: I prefer typing because it's more convenient. Often, I can't find paper or a pen, so typing makes writing easier for me.

× As a college student I must finish some exams and also I can accomplish an essay so I need to write a lot.

✓ As a college student, I must finish some exams and also can accomplish an essay, so I need to write a lot.

句中“also I can accomplish an essay”中“also”位置不当，应该放在“can”之前，且逗号分隔句子更清晰。助动词“can”用法正确，但语序需调整。

× I like to write a lot of things such as notes or Diaries because I think it is helpful and useful for me to organize my mind and a great way to like my my mind.

✓ I like to write a lot of things such as notes or diaries because I think it is helpful and useful for me to organize my mind and a great way to like my mind.

“Diaries”首字母不应大写，且句中“like my my mind”重复且用词错误，应为“like my mind”或更合适的表达。

× Yes, I suppose it had changed because when I was little I often wrote every day, but after graduation I want to write some notes or even novels as I like.

✓ Yes, I suppose it has changed because when I was little I often wrote every day, but after graduation I want to write some notes or even novels as I like.

“had changed”使用过去完成时不合适，应使用现在完成时“has changed”表示从过去到现在的变化。

× In most of case I can't find the papers or a pen to write down on papers, so typing is more handy.

✓ In most cases, I can't find the papers or a pen to write on, so typing is more handy.

“In most of case”应为复数形式“in most cases”，且“write down on papers”中“down”多余，且“on papers”重复，简化为“write on”即可。