Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免不必要的重复和复杂表达。

예시: I don't write very often, only when I have to complete school assignments. I usually don't keep a notebook.

제안: 回答中出现了错误词汇（artillery），表达不清晰且重复。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达喜欢写作的内容和原因。

예시: I like to write journals to record my experiences and thoughts because it helps me remember important moments.

제안: 回答内容混乱且不相关，缺乏逻辑和具体细节。建议直接回答问题并提供具体理由或例子。

예시: Yes, I think my writing changes over time because my ideas and opinions develop as I gain more experiences.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复。建议简洁表达偏好并使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer typing because it's easier to edit and I can write anytime on my phone, which is very convenient.

× I only write when I shouldn't to finish my school assessment.

✓ I only write when I have to finish my school assessment.

这里“shouldn't to finish”结构不正确，应该用“have to”表示必须做某事，动词后不接不定式to。

× I love to write artillery to record my experience and what, uh, what I think.

✓ I love to write articles to record my experience and what I think.

“artillery”是“炮兵”的意思，错误使用，应为“articles”表示文章。

× I think this is very interesting to record myself.

✓ I think it is very interesting to record my thoughts.

“record myself”表达不准确，应该用“record my thoughts”更符合语境。

× Yes, I think my ride is strange, but also I change so so that my experiments, my food is always challenging.

✓ Yes, I think my writing is strange, but I also change a lot, so my experiences and my food are always challenging.

“ride”应为“writing”；“experiments”应为“experiences”；句子结构混乱，需调整代词和名词。

× I prefer typing when I when when I writing because typing is easier to edit and change.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because typing is easier to edit and change.

“I writing”缺少助动词，应为“I am writing”，表示现在进行时。

× I can anytime writing in my phone.

✓ I can write anytime on my phone.

“can”后应接动词原形，“writing”错误；“anytime”位置调整；“in my phone”应为“on my phone”。