Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且内容相关，但“residents”用词不当，应为“readers”或“users”，且回答略显冗长，建议用更准确的词汇并简洁表达。

예시: Yes, I write quite often, mainly by commenting on social media posts about food, fashion, or travel. I enjoy sharing my opinions and engaging with other users.

제안: 回答结构清晰，内容具体且连贯，但可以增加更多细节来丰富答案，例如举例说明引发的有趣对话。

예시: I enjoy writing comments on social media because it allows me to share my thoughts and connect with others. For example, a simple post about a new restaurant once led to a lively discussion about local cuisines.

제안: 回答不够具体，缺乏清晰的主题句和支持细节，且最后一句表达不明确，建议明确说明写作内容如何变化并举例。

예시: Yes, the things I write often change depending on my mood and interests. For instance, I might write about travel one day and then switch to fashion or food the next.

제안: 回答自然且内容丰富，结构合理。可以稍微增加一个连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Personally, I prefer typing when I write because it's faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot to say. Additionally, I can easily edit my work without making a mess.

× Sometimes I even surprise with myself what I come up with.

✓ Sometimes I even surprise myself with what I come up with.

这里的反身代词使用错误，正确的表达是 'surprise myself'，表示“我自己感到惊讶”。'surprise with myself' 结构不正确。建议使用正确的反身代词形式。