Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'a lot' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and correct article usage (e.g., 'writing task one and task 2' should be 'Writing Task 1 and Task 2').

예시: Recently, I have been writing frequently to prepare for the IELTS exam, practising both Writing Task 1 and Task 2. However, in the past, I only wrote occasionally for assignments.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and by structuring your response more clearly. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g., 'its all' should be 'it's all').

예시: Actually, I don't enjoy writing much. However, when I do write, it is usually assignments and essays related to my profession because they are necessary for my studies.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and coherent by using linking words and correct tense usage. For example, use 'have completed' instead of 'completed' to indicate recent completion. Also, try to avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter, clearer sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe the things I write will change in the future. Since I have completed my courses and am no longer a student, I won't need to write assignments or essays anymore.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words for coherence. For example, say 'I prefer typing on the computer' and use 'because' and 'also' smoothly to connect ideas. Additionally, try to vary your vocabulary slightly.

예시: I prefer typing on the computer because it helps me keep track of the word count. Also, I find that I can type faster than I can write by hand.

× I write a lot recently because I need to be prepared for the IELTS exam, so I practice a lot of writing task one and task 2.

✓ I have been writing a lot recently because I need to be prepared for the IELTS exam, so I have been practising a lot of writing task one and task two.

The original sentence uses the simple present tense 'write' and 'practice' with the adverb 'recently', which indicates an action continuing up to the present. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been writing' and 'have been practising' is more appropriate to express ongoing actions that started in the recent past and continue now.

× I practice a lot of writing task one and task 2.

✓ I practise a lot of writing tasks one and two.

The phrase 'writing task one and task 2' should be pluralised to 'writing tasks one and two' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, 'practise' is the British English spelling for the verb.

× But in the past I didn't write a lot except for the assignments.

✓ But in the past, I didn't write a lot except for assignments.

The article 'the' before 'assignments' is unnecessary here because it refers to assignments in general, not specific ones. Also, a comma after 'past' improves sentence clarity.

× As I said, I don't like writing actually, but if I have to write usually its all umm assignments and essays regarding my profession.

✓ As I said, I don't actually like writing, but if I have to write, it's usually all assignments and essays regarding my profession.

The pronoun 'its' should be 'it's' (it is) to be grammatically correct. Also, the adverb 'actually' is better placed after 'don't' for natural English word order. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, I think the things I write will change in the future because I completed my courses and no longer a student so I will not have to do assignments or write essays anymore.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change in the future because I have completed my courses and am no longer a student, so I will not have to do assignments or write essays anymore.

The past action 'completed' should be in present perfect 'have completed' to indicate relevance to the present. The phrase 'no longer a student' needs the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct. Commas improve sentence flow.

× I prefer typing in the computer because the computer can help me calculate the word count.

✓ I prefer typing on the computer because the computer can help me calculate the word count.

The correct preposition with 'typing' and 'computer' is 'on' rather than 'in'. 'Typing on the computer' is the standard collocation.