Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating the examiner's question. Use correct verb tenses and grammar, and keep your answer concise and natural. For example, say "I don't write much these days because I don't have many reasons to write."

예시: I don't write much these days because I don't have many reasons to write. When I was a child, I used to write a lot, like stories and diaries, but now I rarely do.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. Use correct verb tenses and more precise vocabulary. For example, "I like to write lists of things I need to buy because it helps me remember them."

예시: I like to write lists of things I need to buy because it helps me remember them. For instance, last month I wrote a list of stationery items before going shopping, which was very useful.

제안: Answer directly and use correct tenses. Use linking words to explain the change clearly. For example, "Yes, the things I write have changed. When I was younger, I wrote mainly study notes, but now I write shopping lists and other reminders."

예시: Yes, the things I write have changed. When I was younger, I wrote mainly study notes, but now I write shopping lists and other reminders to help me organise daily tasks.

제안: Use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Provide a clear reason with linking words. For example, "I prefer typing because it is more convenient and I can write anywhere easily."

예시: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and I can write anywhere easily, whether I'm at home or on the go.

× Honestly, it's being not.

✓ Honestly, it is not.

The phrase 'it's being not' is incorrect because 'being' is not used in this context. The correct form is 'it is not' to express the negative present state.

× When I was a child I write a lot, but nowadays I have no thing to write.

✓ When I was a child I wrote a lot, but nowadays I have nothing to write.

The verb 'write' should be in past tense 'wrote' to match 'when I was a child'. Also, 'no thing' is incorrect; the correct word is 'nothing'.

× I have no thing to write.

✓ I have nothing to write.

'No thing' is not a correct quantifier; 'nothing' is the proper quantifier to indicate the absence of anything.

× Well, I only like those things which I need in the future.

✓ Well, I only like those things which I will need in the future.

The phrase 'which I need in the future' should use future tense 'will need' to correctly refer to future necessity.

× For example, last month I write my stationary things which I purchase next day.

✓ For example, last month I wrote my stationary things which I purchased the next day.

The verbs 'write' and 'purchase' should be in past tense 'wrote' and 'purchased' to match the past time reference 'last month'.

× That's why I remember these things.

✓ That's why I remember these things.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error detected.

× Of course, because now I was young, I only write those things which I used in my study, but after this I write to my shopping list and other things.

✓ Of course, because when I was young, I only wrote those things which I used in my study, but after that I write my shopping list and other things.

The phrase 'now I was young' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was young'. The verbs 'write' should be 'wrote' in past tense to match 'when I was young'. 'After this' is better as 'after that'. Also, 'write to my shopping list' is incorrect; it should be 'write my shopping list'.

× but after this I write to my shopping list and other things.

✓ but after that I write my shopping list and other things.

'Write to my shopping list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write my shopping list' without 'to'. Also, 'after this' is better expressed as 'after that' for clarity.

× Well, I like to typing because it is a convenient way to write anything and we can write easily in anywhere and every place.

✓ Well, I like typing because it is a convenient way to write anything and we can write easily anywhere and everywhere.

'Like to typing' is incorrect; it should be 'like typing' because 'like' is followed by the gerund form. Also, 'in anywhere and every place' is incorrect; 'anywhere and everywhere' are correct adverbs of place without 'in'.