Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: Yes, I write quite often, especially timetables and checklists. Writing things down helps me remember important tasks and deadlines, so I find it very useful.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用更准确的词汇，并简洁表达原因。

예시: I prefer writing timelines and checklists because they help me organize my day. Writing novels or essays feels challenging and less enjoyable for me.

제안: 回答不完整且含糊，缺乏具体内容。建议直接回答问题，补充具体细节，避免重复和犹豫。

예시: Yes, the things I write change daily because my checklists and timetables are updated according to my tasks and priorities.

제안: 表达较为清晰，但有语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient for me to express my ideas compared to handwriting.

× I always try something, especially those timetable and checklist, because I think writing on the paper always help me remember a lot and don't forget something important or just urgent.

✓ I always try something, especially those timetables and checklists, because I think writing on paper always helps me remember a lot and not forget something important or urgent.

这里“writing”作为动名词使用是正确的，但句中“help”应为第三人称单数形式“helps”，因为主语是“writing”。另外，“don't forget”应改为“not forget”以保持句子结构一致。

× I always try something, especially those timetable and checklist, because I think writing on the paper always help me remember a lot and don't forget something important or just urgent.

✓ I always try something, especially those timetables and checklists, because I think writing on paper always helps me remember a lot and not forget something important or urgent.

“timetable”和“checklist”前有“those”，表示复数，故应使用复数形式“timetables”和“checklists”。

× because I think writing on the paper always help me remember a lot and don't forget something important or just urgent.

✓ because I think writing on paper always helps me remember a lot and not forget something important or urgent.

主语“writing”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“help”应改为“helps”。

× writing on the paper always help me remember a lot and don't forget something important or just urgent.

✓ writing on paper always helps me remember a lot and not forget something important or urgent.

习惯用法中，通常说“writing on paper”而非“writing on the paper”，去掉定冠词更自然。

× Well, just like I said, I'm really fond of writing down on the paper about timeline and checklist rather than writing some novels or articles and essays, which has made me feel difficult to think about.

✓ Well, just like I said, I'm really fond of writing down on paper about timelines and checklists rather than writing some novels, articles, or essays, which have made me feel it difficult to think about.

“timeline”和“checklist”应使用复数形式“timelines”和“checklists”，因为这里指的是一般的多项内容。

× I'm really fond of writing down on the paper about timeline and checklist rather than writing some novels or articles and essays, which has made me feel difficult to think about.

✓ I'm really fond of writing down on paper about timelines and checklists rather than writing some novels, articles, or essays, which have made me feel it difficult to think about.

习惯用法中，通常说“writing down on paper”而非“on the paper”，去掉定冠词更自然。

× which has made me feel difficult to think about.

✓ which have made me feel it difficult to think about.

先行词是复数“novels, articles, or essays”，谓语动词应使用复数“have”。

× which has made me feel difficult to think about.

✓ which have made me feel it difficult to think about.

“feel difficult to think about”结构不完整，应加“it”作为宾语，使句子通顺。

× Well actually I just write a little content, so I just really don't know how to how to answer this question, but I think every day my checklist and timetable will.

✓ Well, actually I just write a little content, so I really don't know how to answer this question, but I think every day my checklist and timetable will change.

句中“how to how to”重复，应删去一个“how to”；句尾不完整，应补充谓语“change”使句子完整。

× Well, to be honest, I prefer typing because I think it is the most efficient and quickest way to express my ideas and thoughts rather than just waste much time on writing something.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer typing because I think it is the most efficient and quickest way to express my ideas and thoughts rather than just waste much time writing something.

“waste time on writing”中“on”多余，习惯用法是“waste time doing something”，应去掉“on”。