Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь давать более чёткий и связный ответ, избегая излишней информации и повторов. Используйте простые предложения и правильные времена.

예시: Yes, I write quite often, especially messages on social media. Writing helps me express my thoughts clearly, and I can edit my words before sending.

제안: Ответ содержит полезную информацию, но предложение не закончено, и есть ошибки в словосочетаниях. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова и завершать мысли, чтобы ответ был более логичным и полным.

예시: I enjoy writing essays because they allow me to explain my opinions on important social issues in detail, which helps me express my thoughts clearly.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и незавершённых предложений. Следует улучшить структуру ответа, использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов, чтобы сделать речь более естественной.

예시: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time. Since childhood, I have enjoyed creating stories to entertain my family, and my vivid imagination helps me improve my writing skills.

제안: Ответ понятен, но можно улучшить связность и убрать некоторые разговорные выражения. Используйте более формальный стиль и связывающие слова для плавности речи.

예시: I don't have a strong preference between typing and handwriting. It usually depends on what is available; if I have my phone, I prefer typing, but if I have a pen and paper, I am comfortable writing by hand.

× Yes definitely I would say that I'm bad at writing than speaking cause writing is something that helps me to express my thoughts clearly and I can correct anytime what I want to say.

✓ Yes definitely I would say that I'm worse at writing than speaking because writing is something that helps me to express my thoughts clearly and I can correct anytime what I want to say.

The phrase 'bad at writing than speaking' is incorrect because 'bad' is an adjective that does not form comparatives with 'than' directly. The correct comparative form is 'worse'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.

× So texting or sending messages through social medias is.

✓ So texting or sending messages through social media is.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, 'social medias' is incorrect; the correct term is 'social media' which is uncountable. The sentence should be completed or rephrased for clarity.

× I like explaining my opinion about some social or crucial problems situations.

✓ I like explaining my opinion about some social or crucial problem situations.

The phrase 'problems situations' is incorrect; it should be 'problem situations' as 'problem' acts as an adjective here. Also, 'about' is correctly used here.

× I like to give more details in written version, so it helps me to express my thoughts clearly and.

✓ I like to give more details in the written version, so it helps me to express my thoughts clearly.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incorrect. Also, 'written version' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to specify it.

× Well, I do think so 'cause as I remember from my childhood, I wanted to be a writer.

✓ Well, I do think so because I remember from my childhood that I wanted to be a writer.

The phrase 'as I remember from my childhood' is awkward; 'because I remember from my childhood that' is clearer and more grammatically correct.

× I like to make up some stories and make my family laughing at at this.

✓ I like to make up some stories and make my family laugh at this.

The phrase 'make my family laughing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'make my family laugh'. Also, there is a repeated 'at' which should be removed.

× Also, I like to I have a vivid imagination that helps me to create.

✓ Also, I have a vivid imagination that helps me to create.

The phrase 'I like to I have' is incorrect and redundant. The sentence should be simplified to 'I have a vivid imagination that helps me to create.'

× I think that it mostly depends on what is by my hands.

✓ I think that it mostly depends on what is in my hands.

The phrase 'by my hands' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to something held in one's hands.

× If I have my phone so I prefer typing, but if there is a pen and some piece of paper, it's OK for me to write down my thoughts.

✓ If I have my phone, I prefer typing, but if there is a pen and a piece of paper, it's OK for me to write down my thoughts.

The sentence is a run-on and needs a comma after 'phone'. Also, 'some piece of paper' should be 'a piece of paper' for singular countable noun.