Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简洁，但表达略显重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达“write”和“record”，并尝试使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I write regularly, mainly keeping a diary and occasionally working on short stories to capture my imagination.

제안: 回答内容丰富但句子较长且重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议分句表达并使用连接词，使回答更流畅自然。

예시: I enjoy writing short stories because they help me express my thoughts and imagination. Moreover, this practice improves my writing skills and creativity.

제안: 回答较好，但“all the time”用词稍显口语化，建议使用更正式的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Certainly, as I gain more life experience, the novels and characters I create will continuously evolve.

제안: 回答表达清晰但略显简单，建议增加具体细节和连接词，使回答更丰富且自然。

예시: I prefer typing because using apps on my smartphone makes it convenient to jot down my ideas quickly and organize them efficiently.

× I keep a diary and sometimes I write some novels because I think it can record my imagination.

✓ I keep a diary and sometimes I write some novels because I think they can record my imagination.

这里的主语是复数的“novels”，所以代词应使用复数形式“they”，而不是单数“it”。

× I like to write some short novels because I think it is a good way to record my thoughts and imagination and of course improve my writing skills and creativity.

✓ I like to write some short novels because I think they are a good way to record my thoughts and imagination and of course improve my writing skills and creativity.

“short novels”是复数，后面指代它们的代词应使用复数“they”，而不是单数“it”。

× I prefer typing because I like to use some apps on my smartphone and it is convenient to record the words.

✓ I prefer typing because I like to use some apps on my smartphone and it is convenient to record words.

“the words”中的定冠词“the”不合适，应该去掉，直接用“words”表示一般意义的“文字”。