Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain clearly with correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I believe that practice makes perfect. For example, I often write short essays and notes to improve my skills rather than just memorizing content.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid filler words like 'Aye'. Be specific about how writing helps you.

예시: I like to write essays, journals, and articles because they help me improve my writing and language skills. Moreover, writing regularly allows me to express my thoughts clearly.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe the things I write may change in the future because my ideas and opinions can evolve over time as I learn more.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason using linking words. Avoid sentence fragments.

예시: I prefer handwriting because I think writing by hand helps me improve my writing and language skills more effectively than typing.

× Yes, I do write a lot because it is often believed that a practice makes the man perfect.

✓ Yes, I do write a lot because it is often believed that practice makes perfect.

The phrase 'a practice' is incorrect here because 'practice' in this context is an uncountable noun and does not require an article. Also, 'the man perfect' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'makes perfect' without 'the man'. This is a common English idiom meaning that practicing leads to perfection.

× So I think writing some task who is very easy rather than learning it or cramming it.

✓ So I think writing some tasks which are very easy is better than learning or cramming them.

The word 'task' is singular but should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'who' is used for people, but here it should be 'which' for things. The sentence structure was incomplete and unclear; it was corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× When I like to write the essays, journals and articles because I think writing these kind of things would help me to improve my writing skills and moreover they would also increase my language skills.

✓ I like to write essays, journals, and articles because I think writing these kinds of things helps me improve my writing skills and moreover increases my language skills.

The phrase 'these kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of things' because 'kinds' is plural to agree with 'these'. Also, 'the essays' is incorrect without context; it should be 'essays' in general. The verb agreement was adjusted to present tense to match the habitual action.

× Yes, I do think so that things that I write would change in the future because it is not written anywhere that the things that we write could not be changed in the future.

✓ Yes, I do think that the things I write will change in the future because it is not written anywhere that the things we write cannot be changed in the future.

The phrase 'I do think so that' is awkward; 'I do think that' is correct. 'Would change' is changed to 'will change' to express future certainty. 'Could not be changed' is better as 'cannot be changed' for clarity. Also, 'the things that I write' is simplified to 'the things I write' for natural English.

× When I prefer handwriting while writing because I think that writing by my hand will. Help me to increase my writing as well as language skills efficiently rather than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting when writing because I think that writing by hand will help me improve my writing as well as my language skills more efficiently than typing.

The sentence started with 'When I prefer' which is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. 'Writing by my hand' is unnatural; 'writing by hand' is the correct phrase. The sentence was fragmented and corrected for clarity and fluency. 'More efficiently than typing' is the correct comparative structure.