Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I am a finance student and my teachers often assign essays and reports that I need to complete.

제안: 回答较好，但句子结构有些重复，连接词使用不足。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，并注意语法准确。

예시: I prefer to write diaries because I like to record what happened each day and plan for the next week, which helps me manage my assignments effectively.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议简化表达，直接说明观点，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Definitely, the things I write now are different from when I was a child because my opinions and thoughts have changed as I grew up.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议完整表达观点，避免口头语，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I prefer typing because it is an efficient way to record my plans and events. However, when I was a child, I preferred handwriting because it felt more personal.

× I am a students majoring finance.

✓ I am a student majoring in finance.

这里'students'是复数形式，但主语是单数'I'，应使用单数'student'。此外，'majoring finance'缺少介词'in'，应为'majoring in finance'。

× So my teacher will assign let's have paper for me to complete.

✓ So my teacher will assign lots of papers for me to complete.

'let's have paper'表达不正确，应该使用量词'lots of'来表示大量的论文。

× So I would say a lot of my time. Is love to for my writing.

✓ So I would say I spend a lot of my time on my writing.

原句结构混乱，缺少动词和介词，正确表达应为'spend time on something'。

× I am a students majoring finance.

✓ I am a student majoring in finance.

同上，'students'应为单数'student'，并补充介词'in'。

× I prefer to write Diaries

✓ I prefer to write diaries

'Diaries'不需要大写，且作为普通名词应小写。

× I have the habits of noting what's has happened today and what I plan to do next week.

✓ I have the habit of noting what has happened today and what I plan to do next week.

'habits'应为单数'habit'，且'of noting'是固定搭配，'what's has happened'中'has'多余，应为'what has happened'。

× Because I think this is a good way for me to manage all my assignment.

✓ Because I think this is a good way for me to manage all my assignments.

'assignment'应为复数'assignments'，因为指多个任务。

× I was say words are right now is definitely different from what I wrote when I was a little kid

✓ I would say the words I use right now are definitely different from what I wrote when I was a little kid

'was say'用法错误，应使用情态动词'would say'表示推测或观点。

× I was say words are right now is definitely different from what I wrote when I was a little kid

✓ I would say the words I use right now are definitely different from what I wrote when I was a little kid

'words'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，且句中缺少主语和动词，需补充。

× because I have different opinions and thinking of for one things as I grew up.

✓ because I have different opinions and thoughts about things as I grew up.

'thinking of for one things'表达不正确，应为'thoughts about things'。

× Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

✓ Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you write?

'when you are writing'可以简化为'when you write'，更符合习惯用法。

× I would choose UM, typewriting because you know, it is a very efficient way to note what you plan to do or what has happened.

✓ I would choose typing because, you know, it is a very efficient way to note what you plan to do or what has happened.

'UM'是口语填充词，书面语中应去除；'typewriting'应为'typing'。

× But when I was a little kid, I prefer to write her right by my hand because.

✓ But when I was a little kid, I preferred to write by hand because...

'prefer'时态应与过去时间状语一致改为'preferred'；'write her right by my hand'表达错误，应为'write by hand'。